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AHJIN
AHJINLv46mth
2024-10-01 18:52

the story starts good with one of a kind interesting plots but it goes down from there. i don't recommend this for naruto fans.

DxD: A Blonde Boy

Vengeance9578
3.1
185 Chs

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AHJIN
AHJINLv4

the story got better towards chapter130+ with the fight

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Reveal spoiler

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Raistlin428
Raistlin428Lv15

I really like the story and the premise and I want to keep reading but the author can not keep a plot line in place. It jumps all over the place with random flashbacks that are not labeled and ending chapters and the next chapter has nothing to do with the previous chapter and nothing tieing them together.

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Darius_Chromwell
Darius_ChromwellLv5

I honestly really enjoyed this fanfic during the earlier chapters, but after a certain point there start to be so many flashbacks and time skips that it becomes incoherent to read. if the flashbacks where consistent it would be different but during a single chapter I think it flashed back to 3 different time periods making it almost impossible to keep up.

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S1LV3RS
S1LV3RSLv4

NOO HAREM TAG FANFICTION NOVEL!!!??LEZZZZ GOOOOO!!!!! BWHSHSRHAHHRHAHAHWHWHSH

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ferferfer2
ferferfer2Lv5

i loved the idea of naruto in dxd, but naruto here is a bored broody and arrogant jerk! i am surprised he is not alcholic because he sure acts like he is

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DaddyCarvz
DaddyCarvzLv4

i give up....I reached until serafall and some random peerage members of sirzech disrespected him...Gaia is nice at first but now she just control and make decisions for naruto that clearly he doesnt want. And naruto being force to do things by people much weaker than him....What is the use of all the power he has if he isnt using it...especially the bijus...dissapointing

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Mad_man13
Mad_man13Lv4

The writing quality and storytelling drop off in the later chapters making the story chaotic and hard to follow. Plus the power scaling for Naruto is all wrong. For context this is Naruto just after the 4 great ninja war + a sharingan and rinnegan. Even if you exclude the eyes, base Naruto should be steamrolling and blitzing his opponents not to even mention sage mode. In regular sage mode a much weaker Naruto was able to fight pain, someone who could destroy all of konaha In one attack. I mean he is quite easily a planet buster and is having trouble with people who can barley destroy a school.

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The_Gatherer13
The_Gatherer13Lv14

this has been a great read up until chapter 80 too much added in not enough written out to explain what is what and where anything is going at some points it's a compelling read and others make me think it's a crackfic and then it's a drama. frankly, it hurts to read. added to that is the amount of filler you throw in it's awful to follow along, so yeah, this is where I drop out

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