He go there,he eat,he death. < | They expect shit like this to be readable? WHAT THE FYCK?
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nah,I already forgotヾ(¯∇ ̄๑)
Translation/grammar?Bad The story?Meh The confusion?Big WTF The way the name's not consistent with the character?Always Conclution?Don't read,least your brain exlpode.
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oh yeah,it said he can feel his muscle burn,so yeah that pretty much comfirm it.
minor mistake here, the sentence you use include 'already feel',which kinda sound like it's happening now to me. You wouldn't say 'already feel' if it's already repairED you say repairING peace≧∇≦
thats 10 chappy
He cooked too much,it's started to shine
I don't know but,in previous chapter it said the mc learn the posture of the 11th form. But wtf form can you fukin learn from seeing people sanding still?
I tried reading some more hoping it's not that hopeless right?NAAAAAAH NUH UH The mc's fucking creep All the conversation feel super fake The relationships are FORSEFULL(Who's that pokemon!!!🤬🤬) He think with dick for the future The fuck man?Really,what the fuck were you thinking while writing this shit? Must be writing with one hand Fucker must be choking his bro
I haven't even read until chapter 10,the MC already can't hold his FUCKING DICK. For those who read this because you want some good story with plenty of fighting with some overpowered power,back away because this is just a story about some guy who can't hold himself from sticking his pole in all the hole he see. Sincerely to Dickhead, I protest