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mercurystarship
mercurystarshipLv211mth
2024-05-14 22:17

I was really let down by this story, especially after enjoying the author's other work, 'Anti-NTR Man.' Initially, it seemed like it was heading in a direction I liked, but it quickly took a turn for the worse. It felt like the story gave me hope and then just crushed it. I'm giving it 3 stars because the writing itself is solid, but honestly, I'm pretty disappointed.

Betrayed, I Met The Demon Lord

Hazy_0832
4.5
134 Chs

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Hazy_0832
Hazy_0832Author

I'd advise you to read at least until chapter 25 if you're already at 23. since it's not what you think at all if you're at that point, buuut OK.

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Trouxa_157
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Admiral_Alex
Admiral_AlexLv15

Main characters get NTR'd. Author tries to play this of because of the hero's "passives" but instead of coming clean and telling the MC about it they continue to sneak around behind his back. Absolutely awful friend, If he had any respect or comradery with the MC he would have told him straight away. No justification whatsoever for his actions. 1 Star

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Pino_3
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Reveal spoiler

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Jem_Brixon21
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This is one of the best upcoming stories I've read in a while 👏👏

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king_starfish
king_starfishLv15

I like this novel, because the MC is a genuinely good person and i hope he has a relationship with the demon lord

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DaoOfCulture
DaoOfCultureLv14

Solid novel with excellent writing. The direction isn't one that most people on WN would enjoy, but if you have a few brain cells to enjoy a story, do give this a read. I enjoy this one more than his other works. And tbh, I would much prefer if mc didn't have a harem and ends up with... let's say best girl, but that is up to the author. I'm sure I'll enjoy the story anyways. Keep up the great work!

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Luis_Luiz
Luis_LuizLv2

I really like all your stories , but this one is better for me ! Please , update more often . .............................................................

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Dman_Gonz_5757
Dman_Gonz_5757Lv15

Really good novel ur cooking author👍👍 its definitely unique i really like it💯 the plot is great etc

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Imrandom
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Not much to say, i love this story keep going author you're cooking, i'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters

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