At first I consider this novel rather woeful. The author has explained his language issues yet I cannot condone the fact that he didn’t attempt to utilise a proofreader for this novel to help correct grammar and the many spelling issues. I find that rather in poor taste and lazy. I am sure there could have been a few volunteers who could assisted in some way to let readers have a smooth experience. Ok got that off my chest. The novel itself is interesting and I must admit captivating. The genre introduced here is a favourite of mine and I do enjoy how it is coming across. I admit I have to interpret things on the fly as the delivery is painful, however I manage to struggle through satisfactorily to enjoy what I have read. All in all it is a decent novel, just really really fix the writing (isn’t there programs out there that can assist, think Grammarly or the like is out there) and I suggest editing the earlier chapters. People haven’t got the patience to try and interpret what is being written if it isn’t clear enough.
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LIKEI think some are called “I am a cultivation bigshot”, “turns out I am a dao ancestor”, “I’m really not the master of the world”, and “I’m really not the demon gods lackey” There are a few others like “I turn out to be a grandmaster”, “ no one really thinks master is a mortal right?”, and probably some of those sign in type system novels which also can be along these lines. There is another that I can recall but not the name. It’s basically about a MC who reincarnates and is accepted by a guy who is the boss of his mountain within a sect, there is something like 7 or so mountains. The MC is the only disciple taken by this guy and when this boss passes he becomes the head of he mountain as well. Anyway the story develops where he is now the leader and has to choose a disciple from the annual disciple choosing ceremony and he takes a girl with the least chance because the system tells him something or other. I am a bit vague on the story etc however I recall I did enjoy that one. Basically when he gifts his disciple with things he gets a random multiplier of the item back, so if he gives say an iron sword, he may get back a celestial sword with shiny lights 😂. I think I like to read that one again so I best fo hunt it down. This is all I can think off offhand so I hope some are of some interest. 👍