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Pantano_87
Pantano_87Lv48mth
2024-05-04 17:22

nice premise and character dialogue, i just hope that he isn't going to be swept by supernatural politics of dxd, and if possible, since it's a dxd FF, chose just good women for the harem (quality>quantity) 👍🏻

001 - What Makes it Hard to Go Home ?

iamSalad
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iamSalad
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Don't worry about getting involved in supernatural politics because Rei is an Astral, and as a astral he doesn't want to be ordered around by random people. Astral beings in Granblue Fantasy have really really high egos. As for the girls in High School DxD, I'm still not decided yet, but i planned to put Rias as one of them

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Tetsuga03
Tetsuga03Lv12

But dxd have many good women in it and if you add slash dog into this then there more.

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Bilal_Arshad
Bilal_ArshadLv4

My only problem was how author wrote where they keep delaying going back to the portal even though they knew it was going to close I mean hit kokabiel alright, why fight vali, stop for rias, sirchez etc.

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Kingless898
Kingless898Lv4

I Love It ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Universe_Supreme
Universe_SupremeLv12

Overall decent read if just to pass the time. Didn't read to many chapters but can already tell MC is bland and a lot of pointless things get done. One such instance was how he even got stuck in this world was completely unnecessary if he knew the portal was gonna close he shouldn't have done all that extra. Author could have just said his instincts made him feel like their was something related to him in this world since he had a previous relationship with Grayfia. Also MC is too humanized I get that he is a transmigrated human, but he's an astral, an archangel, and a fallen angel should've melded the personalities that come with all of that better.

1mth
Garland
GarlandLv4

Despite being initially interesting, the story overall suffered from some plotholes, writing and grammar. First of all, the major plothole that came was how initially it was portrayed that Rei couldn't simply go back to Granblue due to the portals closing but then its eventually revealed that he can actually just open it and go. What was the whole point of it then and even the very concept of the title and the story. Him being stuck in a world could have been fine if opening a portal took a lot of energy and he couldn't actually control where it was connected thus giving a valid reason on why he would remain in the current world he is stuck in. Having a problem that actually wasn't a problem and just him being their for reasons just made the story overall confusing. The story itself suffers from the problems in the original story: Rei still being bland and not overall interesting to read. Forced Harem with characters being in different situations in the Canon for the sake of being with Rei such as Grayfia. The whole situation with Saber was good but then suddenly her being with Rei felt so forced. Pacing combined with the plotholes just makes it worst.

4mth
Tokinada
TokinadaLv1

very good

4mth
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