My only problem was how author wrote where they keep delaying going back to the portal even though they knew it was going to close I mean hit kokabiel alright, why fight vali, stop for rias, sirchez etc.
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well if they just going back to the portal then mc not gonna go back there ever again... and the first world not gonna be dxd but other thing
Just make him interested in the world, not like Write the storyline he doesn't want to be a part of. It just makes it frustrating to read.
iamSalad:well if they just going back to the portal then mc not gonna go back there ever again... and the first world not gonna be dxd but other thing
how can he get interested in world like that... maybe if it's Nasuverse world where there is so many interesting servant but in dxd there is not that much interesting because it's focused on the Fanservice instead of actual interesting plot. The strongest one ExE world already gone so nothing really interested with mc personality especially when he just want to find a way to his own world
Zekril:Just make him interested in the world, not like Write the storyline he doesn't want to be a part of. It just makes it frustrating to read.
But maybe when god already get involved I'm gonna make mc get interested because in Granblue fantasy world being like Thor, Odin, and other mythology creatures is exist too but they're not god but just Primal Beast
