Pantano_87

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usless way of spending point, if you want clothes just order them from a market

Need some editing for a better reading experience, and the biggest problem is the MC, he's first wish is for the memories and experience of Rhongomyniad to be integrated, the guy he was before should be buried under centuries of memories, maybe i'm too much of a **** but that's my opinion, anyway good luck 👍🏻

The protagonist use the inventory/shadow trick for those scroll, and it's a clever way for fooling the hokage, but then he start to use power no 5yo should have, he used shadow travel, stealth and kenjutsu obviusly that is a retarded move if you want to stay under the radar, he should be more intelligent as a Nara, he was alrerdy close to dying a 2 time if not for the system, but he keep being a dumb proud for nothing fool in mo not as traumatized i thought tho

Damn, best Soul Land ff on webnovel in my opinion, great translation and enjoiable character, and the romance is really well written too. 5⭐ for the readable TL and story overall

he's a complete yandere i don't think he's going for the harem route

I'm loving this character, even if i'm not a fan of Fate, hope you save haruhime for her fluffyness

Harry's character is disturbing he keep getting controlled by everybody, it makes no sense, the way the Justice League acted should have closed every positive outlook about them. There's no mentioning of he's own emotional situation either, is he angry, depressed, or something else, he just lost Sirius after who know what happened, understood that he was just a pawn for Albus plan and then after basically "killing" himself by going trough the veil he get experimented for over a year, even if he didn't feel anything he should feel violated you know? how can someone function as a Person after that and don't lash out is what makes no sense. I can't "connect" with this story unfortunately as this Harry seems not alive.

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? what happened? i think something went wrong here