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2024-04-29 02:26

It wasn't what I hoped this would be. I was imagining this was going to be another "Hard Enough" style fiction where the protagonist already had their team at full strength. That isn't what this is. It's another 11 year old going on a journey, only this one is running a farm and occasionally goes out on his flying pokemon to do journey like things. It comes off as confused. It wants to be both a farming fiction and a journey fiction, but does neither well. Farming fictions usually require detailed knowledge of actual farming and the slow build-up of farming resources. Often you can draw people's interest by showing how easy it is to create streams of revenue with just some small piece of land. Eventually building a farming empire. Journey fictions require either an adventure into the unknown or the meticulous training of cool pokemon. Unfortunately, the author doesn't have detailed knowledge of farming, it's mainly just made-up pokemon stuff. The farming aspect kills whatever adventure the story has and the training is pretty skimmed over. It's not bad, but I was hoping for a reclusive master pokemon trainer that high level pokemon trainers kept bumping into and challenging.

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Sin_of_Envy
Sin_of_EnvyLv12

good job with your review

funmaxwell
funmaxwellLv14

thanks for the heads up.

BurgerNight
BurgerNightLv4

'Pokemon: a new path' It's pretty much what you are looking for

FairyCannon
FairyCannonLv2

Thanks, I'll take a look at it.

BurgerNight:'Pokemon: a new path' It's pretty much what you are looking for
Lunatic_17
Lunatic_17Lv4

pokemon a new path is exactly what you described in your review(sort of atleast) it mainly focuses on farming and a ranch like lifestyle in the paldea region and he does get op mons down the line, though if you do want to read it ,you would need to go to scribblehub as the initial 300 or so chapters got nuked by webnovel . the author is currently posting the chapters after the initial 300 in the current book present in webnovel

FairyCannon:Thanks, I'll take a look at it.
FairyCannon
FairyCannonLv2

Thank you so much. I'll finish the ff of Naruto that I'm watching and go watch that one. 👍

Lunatic_17:pokemon a new path is exactly what you described in your review(sort of atleast) it mainly focuses on farming and a ranch like lifestyle in the paldea region and he does get op mons down the line, though if you do want to read it ,you would need to go to scribblehub as the initial 300 or so chapters got nuked by webnovel . the author is currently posting the chapters after the initial 300 in the current book present in webnovel
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