This young master is very displeased on how empty this land is! As expected of majority of common people! They can't see Mt. Tai!

It wasn't what I hoped this would be. I was imagining this was going to be another "Hard Enough" style fiction where the protagonist already had their team at full strength. That isn't what this is. It's another 11 year old going on a journey, only this one is running a farm and occasionally goes out on his flying pokemon to do journey like things. It comes off as confused. It wants to be both a farming fiction and a journey fiction, but does neither well. Farming fictions usually require detailed knowledge of actual farming and the slow build-up of farming resources. Often you can draw people's interest by showing how easy it is to create streams of revenue with just some small piece of land. Eventually building a farming empire. Journey fictions require either an adventure into the unknown or the meticulous training of cool pokemon. Unfortunately, the author doesn't have detailed knowledge of farming, it's mainly just made-up pokemon stuff. The farming aspect kills whatever adventure the story has and the training is pretty skimmed over. It's not bad, but I was hoping for a reclusive master pokemon trainer that high level pokemon trainers kept bumping into and challenging.

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I mean it's a Pokemon fic with farming elements, what more is there to say? Very enjoyable and entertaining so far, would recommend for sure.

You sure love the exclamation point (!). Seriously every conversation ends up with it and it sure gets annoying.

It is a great story where the main character is well written. he doesn't get op if 5 chapters but is slowly building his strength. eccept for a couple of mistakes with moves, it is a great way to write a pokemon fic.

Great work. I really like the setting of the story. Farming is cool. I finally knows grom where they get meat in pokemon world. I really look forward to Mc farm development. As well as his prowess as a trainer.

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