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jnjones73
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2024-06-16 23:47

**all this that's about to be said, im still going to save the story and hope the Author revamps so I can read it all over again** The author gave a Quest system, but then went in a completely different route. skipping levels, and key information. the story has potential, but go back and add some chapters between levels 5-10 and then 10-20 give info on the parts you started explaining. it will make the introduction of skills more understandable. Lastly, who is the character, family, age, and his name should be told in a better way then a random whisper.

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Sirius459
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Thanks For Your Review, First Off All Yes, it is a system genre but I don't want to more focus about the level, the skill, i want more the story focus about the fantasy like the dungeon, the monsters, how the main character trying understand his system slowly. Bcause the secret of the system is inside the dungeon.

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