jnjones73

he is 11 right... started at 8 now 3 years... (even though the years are all over the place)

loving the story been reading for a long time. But only thing is are you purposefully keeping this arch of get strong going so long while you plan for Ashlen, Nero, his parents/sister and wife/kids?

thought it was 20 years. .. raising tutle for 20 and born the same time.

below?

her?

either im drunk or thr last 2 or 3 chapters are the same thing repeated inside and out..... or i could be drunk

too many 1st to 3rd person switches

thought he had orange

the math is not mathing

nvm ..... reading is fundamental. time lapse