jnjones73

either im drunk or thr last 2 or 3 chapters are the same thing repeated inside and out..... or i could be drunk

too many 1st to 3rd person switches

thought he had orange

the math is not mathing

nvm ..... reading is fundamental. time lapse

how he go from over a week of training back to 2 days old

why ....

20,000 is not 2 grand its 20

so he had half a mil in his account not 50k... I hope this is the correction

been like this and im confused.