Sirius459
Hi New Author Here ^_^ I'm Enjoying Writting Fantasy So Feel Free to Read My Works Feel Free to Contact Me on Discord: NoobMaster69#3853
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Nope i don't want make my character immediately become strong or too OP, i want emphasis create my character have development, having feeling fail again and again, lost something precious and overcome all of his weaknesses. PS: Thanks you for giving my book a review and i hope you enjoyed this little adventure.
After i read all the chapter i came with the conclusion about this story. First of all the dialog need some improvement it's not like reading a novel but feels like a movie script the world building you create was really nice and i enjoyed reading it so overall yeah this is a good story but need some improvement on the dialog.
well at least you got reincarnated dude
ooh a dragon sword