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2024-05-24 06:51

I have read the book up to chapter number 34. The book is great and I had fun reading it, although there are a few problems with it. The biggest one is the terrible grammar and the resulting confusion in the text, it makes it hard to read and you don't know what the author meant when writing a scene. The side characters are not one-dimensional and have their own stories, antipathies, preferences, etc. which makes the book more interesting. The progression of the plot is just right neither, too slow nor too fast. The world-building is slow, which I consider a positive because it is much better than the typical big info dump. The character development and skills of the main character are brilliantly portrayed, you can see that the MC is focused on survival and doesn't have time for any romance or the like. The bluntness of the updates is steady for which the author can be commended, as he does this despite the low power stone count. I wish a pleasant and peaceful day to those reading this comment. Good luck author don't drop this book Try to polish your skills on this book, especially grammar. (Ps. Maybe ask some English-speaking colleague for help

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