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Hello! This is my newest book; I hope you will like it. To support me, please send powerstones and help spread the word about the story. What are my thoughts on the book? In my opinion did a decent job, but ultimately, the final say is up to you. I hope you will like the book. with just 50 powers stone you get 1 more new chapter and for 10 golden ticket also 1 new chapter.

Wow c'est génial merci beaucoup pour votre dur travail mais si possible j'aimerais demander si il y aurais d'autre endroit où en peu lire vos histoires il m'est difficile de payer de plus il semble que portable est aussi quelques disfonctionnement

In many stories there is thing where people are either real and well written or have extreme and exaggerated personalities This is not either they are very close to being real so close that the film of unreality is ever so more apparent there are thing way people react that are just wrong sure it’s pretty good beside that but the reaction to certain thing in such a way and the lack of reaction to other things is such a major turn off for me that I wasted time writing this whole review The reactions bother me so much

The characters' dynamics are amazing. The books story is very attention-grabbing. You can tell the author of the book put a lot of heart into the story. Amazing!

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Story starts off interesting and fine but after around 50 to 60 chapters the writing becomes extremely lazy. There are multiple grammer errors along with repeated lines (especially the line where they tell eachother they can't live without one another. This one appears 5 to 6 times in the SAME chapter and it happens in multiple chapters). It feels as though the author just didn't care about their content and decided to turn to Chat GPT (the logo even appears in one of the chapters). This is especially seen in the training to fight against the demon lord as all of a sudden the stat blocks for the various demons are all over the place (Demon general's stats range from 200 to 11,000 and then back down to the hundreds which makes absolutely no sense especially when we have no knowledge of the MC's stats at this point either). I would say more about the characters becoming cardboard cuttouts and the villains having massive plot armor that allows them to escape at a moments notice but at this point it doesn't feel worth it. Hopefully I can save you some money and dissapointment.

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