lowstar

Having some unknown person buy the company you work at to get close to you...would be hella creepy

lol, the rule holds true yet again

Missed a chance for a tasty sip, she could've gotten some interesting benefits. Plus, idiot zealots like that just aren't worth the trouble of keeping around.

considering the way she treated those kids, I'm surprised she even brings it up

arrogant is pretty accurate

sounds like the perfect excuse for Serafall and Layla to do some media outreach to build goodwill?

stop complaining if you want to be overpowered. that's part of being overpowered, all your fights are going to be boring.

The character list is going to get unwieldy as time goes on. To me, it'd be better to have stat bonuses and any special abilities that they may give. Like kirito might give dual wielding and +2 to dex and/or agility, or something like that. That way you have a cumulative sum of how good Fran is compared to how she started, and then keep the list of acquired templates off on the side somewhere.

Kirito is just a disappointment. For what it's worth, a good gacha system should have mediocre pulls from time to time.

Very well written, especially for a power fantasy. Definitely worth reading, but I'm hesitant to give this a higher rating for a few reasons. The girlfriends that Gwen gets are largely inconsequential, to the point they might as well not even be there. The system is extremely clunky, and while there is eventually a story explanation for that, it sometimes makes it extremely difficult to read. Finally, the cognitive dissonance of Gwen one-shotting pretty much everything she fights, yet still complaining that she's bored and wants a challenge, all while being unwilling to enter a fight with anything on her level. Definitely one of the better fanfics on WN, despite those hangups, so worth the read.