Overall this is one of the worst GoT fics I’ve read. The mc makes tons idiotic decisions, while the author tries to make him seem extremely intelligent. The pacing is slower then any other GoT fic I’ve read. 25000+ words and the mc is like 3 years old. Don’t come into this expecting any sort of realism. It feels like a 10 year old writing his power fantasy. I’m sure the author is also deleting any non 5 star reviews, there were a ton of people upset with this story, yet no negative reviews. You’ll never grow author if you only except the praise and not the criticism.
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LIKEWorld building is 5 stars since it’s GRRMs world. And update stability is 4 stars since it’s 2 chaps a week. Writing quality is 3 stars, average is every way. Also the author is allergic to using “” for dialogue. Character development is 1 star.
Character design is 1 star and story development is 1 star for reasons mentioned above.
Your review is noted, can’t do anything if his character doesn’t suit your taste, I only escalated his actions once he had the powers to modify his body. He is 2-3 year old currently, but has a transmigrated soul and powers. I think that makes good enough case for his actions. I prefer not to timeskip his earlier years, as I like to add more info on what our character was doing in his earlier years. Also, as a transmigrated soul, he just can’t lie down and wait till he grows up to do everything. He has to be doing something in his earlier years. I write this as a background for his future powers. I don’t like to timeskip 10 years and then have a MC who pulls various powers put of his A*s.
Then your fic is gonna be longer than the original novels 😂. Which again is going to lead everyone to think it’s never going to be finished. I don’t want to read 200 chapters just for him to FINALLY be considered an adult in this world. His character doesn’t bother me but so far it’s just been craziness, and it’s so early on there isn’t really any development.
