The story is good and has a lot of potential, the only thing I really didn’t like was how the mc behaved when the Maester tried to feed and he threw a tantrum

Overall this is one of the worst GoT fics I’ve read. The mc makes tons idiotic decisions, while the author tries to make him seem extremely intelligent. The pacing is slower then any other GoT fic I’ve read. 25000+ words and the mc is like 3 years old. Don’t come into this expecting any sort of realism. It feels like a 10 year old writing his power fantasy. I’m sure the author is also deleting any non 5 star reviews, there were a ton of people upset with this story, yet no negative reviews. You’ll never grow author if you only except the praise and not the criticism.

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Something that I have always wondered is if the Valyrians conquered the continent of Essos because all the noble families of Valyria died? It just doesn't make sense, who ruled the big cities in Essos? the slaves? Weren't there dragon lords ruling those cities? Didn't the families of Valyria have their own territories?

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Me gustó tu fanfic y espero muchas cosas de el también sería genial si es leal a los targaryen y sobre todo que se quede con rhaella y tengoas ganas de leer actualiza ya jajajaj