the entire story seems too convenient for the mc. The mc has literally faced no setbacks, opposition and struggle. The way he confidently dismisses more powerful people than him is frankly laughably absurd because we all know he ain't that smart and charismatic enough to not get burned by daemon or ruined by his own hubris.
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It is true, but we must not be cruel taboos in the qualifications. Three stars would also be good.
Si no te gusta, no lo leas, no hay necesidad de tus criticas, si tanto sabes, escribe uno tu y hazlo a tu manera
'too convenient', fair enough, at the time I was writing this (almost a year ago I think), this app users doesn't like mcs struggling due to their noticeable inherent mindset of SI-ing themselves in all the fanfics written here, even if the author stated specifically that it isn't an SI fanfiction, I would be glad if it wasn't the case anymore, but the comments I've gotten so far has yet to get my hopes up bar you, though you seemed to only leave bad reviews and reminded me of a specific types of users in this app, but maybe I'm just being too negative, so I hope I'm wrong. The rest of your criticism though I feel like you missed the context of those conversations on why he was able to be confident, and the whole point that he was supposed to be full of hubris by all his talks of ambition. nice review though, thanks![img=recommend]
this person is just going around leaving mainly negative comments and it also looks like this person caused someone to delete their book, telling the person to find a different hobby.
Giver_Of_Crabs_165:'too convenient', fair enough, at the time I was writing this (almost a year ago I think), this app users doesn't like mcs struggling due to their noticeable inherent mindset of SI-ing themselves in all the fanfics written here, even if the author stated specifically that it isn't an SI fanfiction, I would be glad if it wasn't the case anymore, but the comments I've gotten so far has yet to get my hopes up bar you, though you seemed to only leave bad reviews and reminded me of a specific types of users in this app, but maybe I'm just being too negative, so I hope I'm wrong. The rest of your criticism though I feel like you missed the context of those conversations on why he was able to be confident, and the whole point that he was supposed to be full of hubris by all his talks of ambition. nice review though, thanks![img=recommend]
Zancrowe:Si no te gusta, no lo leas, no hay necesidad de tus criticas, si tanto sabes, escribe uno tu y hazlo a tu manera
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The reviewer : "If you want quote on quote struggle please visit your nearest public library and read hardcover literary books instead of lurking WN app."
Giver_Of_Crabs_165:'too convenient', fair enough, at the time I was writing this (almost a year ago I think), this app users doesn't like mcs struggling due to their noticeable inherent mindset of SI-ing themselves in all the fanfics written here, even if the author stated specifically that it isn't an SI fanfiction, I would be glad if it wasn't the case anymore, but the comments I've gotten so far has yet to get my hopes up bar you, though you seemed to only leave bad reviews and reminded me of a specific types of users in this app, but maybe I'm just being too negative, so I hope I'm wrong. The rest of your criticism though I feel like you missed the context of those conversations on why he was able to be confident, and the whole point that he was supposed to be full of hubris by all his talks of ambition. nice review though, thanks![img=recommend]
The idiot has given every story she has reviewed a 3 or below star don’t take it seriously
tbh I already read this fic from this app and I haven't read the newer ones after 30+ chapters. The only thing that I don't like in this fic is that the guy is overreaching, so I kinda agree with this review. From what I can remember, the mc justified that his family 'should/must' have a dragon as it is their right as 'Valyrians' . He married a Velaryon and asked the king to give their baby an egg and he agreed. Tell me if it changes. Anyways, make it make sense bro as I want to give it another chance. Is Jaehaerys that dumb to let another family get his dragons regardless if it's a part of a Valyrian family?
Giver_Of_Crabs_165:'too convenient', fair enough, at the time I was writing this (almost a year ago I think), this app users doesn't like mcs struggling due to their noticeable inherent mindset of SI-ing themselves in all the fanfics written here, even if the author stated specifically that it isn't an SI fanfiction, I would be glad if it wasn't the case anymore, but the comments I've gotten so far has yet to get my hopes up bar you, though you seemed to only leave bad reviews and reminded me of a specific types of users in this app, but maybe I'm just being too negative, so I hope I'm wrong. The rest of your criticism though I feel like you missed the context of those conversations on why he was able to be confident, and the whole point that he was supposed to be full of hubris by all his talks of ambition. nice review though, thanks![img=recommend]
