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SUPER_BOYLv31yr
2024-04-02 11:41

this story so far is great overall this is a great house of the dragon fan fic keep it up i love the characters and i can't wait to see your take on the dance and how the celtigar fit in the dance than the original one in fire and blood keep it up.

The Crab's Dance - A Celtigar's Tale [REUPLOAD]

Giver_Of_Crabs_165
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Giver_Of_Crabs_165
Giver_Of_Crabs_165Author

thanks! though I would like to say, and don't take this as an insult, you should add commas in between your words. it feels kind of jarring to read your comments, and if you're not a native speaker, don't worry, just keep learning, using google translate is good sometimes, even chatgpt as I used it in this fanfic, and I myself am not a native.

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SUPER_BOY
SUPER_BOYLv3

it's fine I'm not angry and, my question is will there be a dance of the dragons in this story.

Giver_Of_Crabs_165:thanks! though I would like to say, and don't take this as an insult, you should add commas in between your words. it feels kind of jarring to read your comments, and if you're not a native speaker, don't worry, just keep learning, using google translate is good sometimes, even chatgpt as I used it in this fanfic, and I myself am not a native.
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Giver_Of_Crabs_165
Giver_Of_Crabs_165Author

the short is answer is yes. though the path towards there will be a lot different from the books.

SUPER_BOY:it's fine I'm not angry and, my question is will there be a dance of the dragons in this story.
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KK9494
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It's a good one, I like it. Trust me in this. I tried to write a HOTD SI fanfic myself, so I can speak with experience this is a good fanfic

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This novel might get more attention if it is published in June, but I have little to say about the whole thing. It needs more development and much more kingdom construction but it's coming, good story.

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Bob_Bob_8597
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Really good novel to be honest. Pacing is good and the story is new and cool with good grammar. One of the best Game of Thrones fan fictions out there

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Gave me crabs once. 5/5 would crab again

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L0st_3368
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Recently re-read the old fanfic because I enjoyed it so much. Really glad your picking it back up.

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RegalObscure
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While I personally didn't like this work. I am giving a 5 star just to offset joe_caa abysmal review.

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How the hell could this masterpiece have gone unnoticed? . . .

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if you drop this I swear to God I'll find you and kill you one or the other.

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One of the best and most unique HOTD fanfics, its enjoyable to read a non targaryen mc fanfics, please keep updating...

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