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I enjoy reading Modern Family, it's quite relaxing. But this one is one of the worst I've ever read (I've read 4 chapters). Let's take the downsides one by one: 1. Too much switching between viewpoints, 2 characters will say a couple of lines and the viewpoint will immediately switch to another character's comment, which breaks the rhythm of the narrative and is confusing. 2. Too much description of actions like: (turned head), (leaned back), (said in a serious tone), (pause), all of this stuff needs to be removed or written more smoothly, for example, not "Claire (in a shocked tone): Oh my God!" but "Claire said in surprise: Oh my God!" or just "Claire: Oh my God!" People often encounter the phrase "Oh my God!" in everyday life, so we don't necessarily need to specify what the intonation was, our imagination will do it itself and there are a lot of such moments. And "(pause)" in dialogues can simply be highlighted as "...", so many people do. 3. The interaction of characters in the chapters is prim, more description of what is happening is needed from the third person. Because the chapters are short, and everything that happens there does not even reach the level of retelling the series episodes.

I agree with your last sentence. I want Ed to leave Taylor just because I'm tired of their drama, even though I like Taylor herself.

in my opinion, Vanessa is more like an abandoned cat that the MC picked up and raised. Being friends is possible, but being lovers is somehow too far-fetched. In terms of relationships, Haley is the best fit, especially now that Ed got rid of the curses. I just hope that there will be no Taylor-Ed-Hailey triangle, and MC will choose one of them, and if he chooses a harem, then at least there will be no soap drama, the author is not very good at drama.

it was obvious that Maya would become Isao's woman, but why so much drama? And why do everything so quickly? It doesn't look convincing, especially the words "I love you", it would be more correct to say: "my "little brother" fell in love with you", Author, you don't even try to write a romantic line between Isao and his women, the characters of all the women have no individuality, they are all just lustful females who are greedy for MC's penis, and the fact that in the original stories they had their own individual character traits that made them interesting - is completely forgotten, because the main thing is lust. Eh, all the same, this work will also go to the trash.

Why not send all the ill-wishers into an eternal Tsukuyomi? There they will forever see how all their nightmares come true. In reality, they will all be in a coma.

Mitsuko Bakugo is one of the best female characters in BNHA for me, despite her small number of appearances. She is a mature woman, a good mother, but at the same time has an explosive character which adds more charm to her. However, if you want to make her Isao's woman, then let her be a widow in your version of BNHA, otherwise I personally don't want to read the plot of Netori.

I can recommend: 1. Popular: Sekirei, Mushoku Tensei, Shinmai Maou. 2. Rarely mentioned: Grisaia no Meikyuu, Heavy Object, Claymore, Magi. 3. Almost not mentioned: Freezing, Jormungand, Pirate black lagoon. 4. Main stream: DXD, BNHA, Naruto, Bleach, One Piece, Akame.

It is true that the power level in Danmachi is higher than in Kimetsu, HoD and possibly Mahouka. However, the level of the MC's powers is clearly higher than the 2nd level of the adventurer, because I cannot imagine how the same Bell at the 2nd level kills Muzan. Therefore, it is true that MS is weaker than he is.

in my opinion, the author himself did not decide on the final choice of the romantic line, otherwise it would not have lasted 100+ chapters

If we are talking about Hayley, then you are right, but still the curse is complete nonsense (my personal opinion). It's a pity that Ed didn't eat more chocolate before talking to Taylor.