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2024-05-03 21:38

Hi I liked your story and Its premise. I have only one doubt, though Hachiman is not aware of everything happened in the anime, he should have known more about the character outline of other characters, He should be more preceptive of Yui's and Iroha's manipulation. I like to discuss this with you If you don't mind over reddit or discord. The good thing I liked about this is, he is not a different person he is Hachiman himself who got the knowledge from his previous life.

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Hello there, thanks for the review, I appreciate it. Coming to the topic, Yui, or the mentioned character Iroha, who hasn't appeared yet(:in the fic) does have some manipulative personality. However, I still think that the anime never dove deep into those traits, especially in regards to Yui. Many wouldn't catch on to those small hints given in the show. That is the same case with Hachiman possessing previous life memories. Even if there were any doubts Hachiman may have, and he did notice them personally, I am not planning on exploring them too deeply, especially Yui's. Well, it may seem like I am taking an easy route, ignoring them, but that is what I would like this fic to be. Nevertheless, I did try to portray Yui's negative traits to some extent, which you will see in future chapters. As for reddit or discord, I don't have them, but if you still think you would like to continue our discussion, just say it, I wouldn't mind creating.

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I want say some things, but I am happy to discuss with it on a closed platform rather than open. you can suggest anything you are comfortable with. Reddit will be a Google option. Also I would be happy If web novel had a good messenger system. to say, I am barely active on webnobel then ff.nrt or reddit.

WrightBrothers:Hello there, thanks for the review, I appreciate it. Coming to the topic, Yui, or the mentioned character Iroha, who hasn't appeared yet(:in the fic) does have some manipulative personality. However, I still think that the anime never dove deep into those traits, especially in regards to Yui. Many wouldn't catch on to those small hints given in the show. That is the same case with Hachiman possessing previous life memories. Even if there were any doubts Hachiman may have, and he did notice them personally, I am not planning on exploring them too deeply, especially Yui's. Well, it may seem like I am taking an easy route, ignoring them, but that is what I would like this fic to be. Nevertheless, I did try to portray Yui's negative traits to some extent, which you will see in future chapters. As for reddit or discord, I don't have them, but if you still think you would like to continue our discussion, just say it, I wouldn't mind creating.
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if you don't mind, you can DM me on reddit, my I'd is u/oldmails.

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