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good luck

the author would have decripected the whole chapter and with the intrulude following that with irony from cyndrella and shakespeare.

you know in the original the lines didn't describe the positive moment right, so using this same line here seems odd.

any way, more than what this chapter about. this one is a nice chill chapter.

yes, it's really bad. What is the purpose of that. Aside from inducing drama, in america it somewhat like a tradition but in Japan, just a ln companies tatics to include more yui scenes and seperate both the MCs. If you are especially speaking about the gif in you reply. I am not into that. Also, no organic or natural friendship will be like the friendship between Yuigahama and yukino. There are lots of best friends are there in various anime or manga or LN none of that are like that.

It would be gladly appreciated if the stupid prom will never happen. good work.

congratulations.

man, I don't mind their presence, but every time it's like them interrupting their moments. At this point of relationship, and the time they spent together, it's normal for other people to walk in on them, as it is a public place, but they should stop making it a big deal Also, it's seems like forced everyone is searching for him, despite him not an incharge.

Good chapter, but explaining this using a different wording will be better. Multiple times Yukino's tsundre(though she is Kudere) behaviour is explained using same wording.

Good chapter, I do have a suggestion though, here seems the characters are always together, ofcourse it's a romance novel the main leads indeed will be together, but the rest of the cast, on every arc there is yui, haruno, komachi. It's ok tho have them around for a brief moment of thime,but not like what to say make them driving factor for the events. This two three chapters are good, In original novel Hachiman indeed used others as driving force as he lacks courage and to pessimistic and can't tackle his own feelings, but due to his previous life memories, this Hachiman is not like that, so Its ok for him to move a plot without help from komachi or yui. which he already does with his business venture and his friend. But here and there a decent sized arc of the main couple would be good, and a intermediate chapter focused on other will be perfect. For the rest it's all you choice.