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NaoNaku
NaoNakuLv48mth
2024-09-02 07:49

I've been reading this story for a while and I highly recommend it. I don't remember the original story very well but I can tell that the essence of the characters is still there. Even though Hikigaya has other memories, he is still himself. I love how the relationship between him and Yukino is handled, and how Yui pulls away from Hikigaya so as not to break her friendship with Yukino. The interactions are quite comfortable to read and there are times when a smile is unavoidable. Keep up the good work, author, I love your story.

[OreGaIru : New Me!]

WrightBrothers
4.5
285 Chs

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Unpaid_FoxGod
Unpaid_FoxGodLv14

hi, may i know how the story goes in terms of progression? like does he have a hobby like making novel/ drawing manga or is it just constant progression for the romance like in the anime and going places.

4mth
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NaoNaku
NaoNakuLv4

Hi, Unpaid_Foxgod. You could say he does have a 'hobby', it is one of the points in the story(I dont want to mention it since it would be a spoiler). The plot is pretty much similar as the original with a few changes and a slightly different perspective(since the writer has his own perspective of each character) and obviously another representation of the scenes. Hopefully you will try the novel and like it as well as we do.

4mth
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N_RR
N_RRLv4

he designs games if thats help you. but the fic mostly focus on between MC school life and romance

Unpaid_FoxGod:hi, may i know how the story goes in terms of progression? like does he have a hobby like making novel/ drawing manga or is it just constant progression for the romance like in the anime and going places.
3mth
2
Unpaid_FoxGod
Unpaid_FoxGodLv14

thank you

N_RR:he designs games if thats help you. but the fic mostly focus on between MC school life and romance
3mth
1
Unpaid_FoxGod
Unpaid_FoxGodLv14

i didnt see this, thank you

NaoNaku:Hi, Unpaid_Foxgod. You could say he does have a 'hobby', it is one of the points in the story(I dont want to mention it since it would be a spoiler). The plot is pretty much similar as the original with a few changes and a slightly different perspective(since the writer has his own perspective of each character) and obviously another representation of the scenes. Hopefully you will try the novel and like it as well as we do.
3mth
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N_RR
N_RRLv4

NP

Unpaid_FoxGod:thank you
3mth
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WrightBrothers
WrightBrothersAuthor

Hello there, dear WebNovel Readers! This is Author - WrightBrothers. Been working on this project for a LONG time. Put in a lot of time and effort. Written and Rewritten many chapters, again and again and again. Finally, I am posting the book after making sure I had a great draft for around 1/5th of the chapters this book might include.(:Expect constant uploads) Likely, I promise the best content and quality for your precious time. (I am posting this after realising 6chapters, so feel free to verify) Apologies if I take my chances and become arrogant - I would claim I did my best to pull off THE best Fan-fic for [My Teen Romantic Comedy SNAFU]. Well, that's my opinion. So, try my book and share your opinions. Treat this review as Q&A. A good critical review would be helpful and much appreciated. Plz, no bot reviews. (I am adding the cover photo of the book)

1yr

N_RR
N_RRLv4

Good. Too Good Actually. The initial chapters, upto 60 or so starts off a bit slow, but engaging enough. However, once that's over, the Author goes literally into GOD mode. The interactions of Hachiman and Yukinoshita are pure gold. The characters doesn't act out of their zone and develops differently with each interactions with different, new Hachiman.(Dude is on full sigma mode) The author touched almost all events in the anime but skipped whatever that is unnecessary and even given extra information that anime doest portray or we may have missed. Writing Quality is top notch. Like excellent. Best amongst the Best for a Fan-fic I have read in this platform. If I may want to be little knit picking, than that would be how upfront Hachiman acts with Yui in friend zoning her. Kinda feels down seeing she gets the same even here, but hey here she atleast didn't fell too deep for him. The updates are also good, with one chapter a day. (As of now there are 173chp, and trust me there was not a single day without a chapter) Thas it for the review. Keep up the excellent work Author. Read the recent Field Trip Arc, and damn I love it. All the best.

8mth
Pengamat_Ketiga
Pengamat_KetigaLv11

I have read 30 chapters and I think you can just watch the anime. overall the story is almost no different, like you copy and paste with a few small edits without any impact, maybe there is a slight impact but not to the point of disrupting the Canon event.

1yr
Reality_warper004
Reality_warper004Lv4

Super Awesome, Super Fluff, And actually chad Hikki and Super Kawai~ Yukino. Its the sweetest thing i have ever read.

10mth
DaoistiJ9Xt9
DaoistiJ9Xt9Lv4

After recently finishing the anime, I didn’t want to read any fanfics as I felt it would distort my feelings about the series. However, humans being contradictory beings, I chose to search anyways. That is when I stumbled on to this gem whose sinopsis intrigued me. With all my willpower I resisted reading this but it only lasted 2 days. Now I think the only major flaw is that there is TOO FEW CHAPTERS!

1yr
DJREF
DJREFLv10

Amongst hundreds of snafu/orgairu fanfic that I have read from fanfic, Wattpad. pixiv, and beyond, this fanfic can stand in the top 50 of my favourite fanfic from this series, due to the author's ability to insert his unique 'twist' or aspect into the original story without causing Hachiman to go into any type of extremes (commonly occurs intentional or unintentional by other fanfic authors) or make any other character lose their humanity with a rigid copy paste response from the original story. BTW @author @wrightrothers; there is a new tag - my teen romantic comedy snafu - that you might want to add to the fanfic

1yr
Eugene_K
Eugene_KLv1

You know,every story is unique for each person. And that story just motivate me to work on my project when I remember MC projects and that only his hard work can grant his success,not only his ideas in mind. So, thanks for writing and good luck :)

10mth
TreeManFromMovies
TreeManFromMoviesLv14

I always stay late waiting for the chapter update before going to sleep. Really love all the interaction with the character. Every interaction don’t feel forced, I feel like I can even relate with the emotions of the character. The only thing I don’t like is sometimes the author misspell the character name.

10mth
ZeaZ_
ZeaZ_Lv13

Pretty good overall. 8man gunning for Yukino even in early stages is such a refreshing thing to read, Good job author. This is truly recommended one.

10mth
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