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akasuna123
akasuna123Lv56mth
2024-04-17 07:39

nothing but training I am bored to death. why is nobody questioning or alarmed by mc suddenly disappearing in dungeons for training for a long time?

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Izana07
Izana07Author

๐Ÿ˜ฉ Seriously bro, this is developing the plot. If you want to have the plot up to your liking, you can always go read other DxD books or write your own Fanfiction. it is really important to note that if I made him OP from the beginning without noting the readers on how he got his power, I would get negative backlash and if i don't do this training arc... there's still negative backlash

Izana07
Izana07Author

Because the fact is that when he goes into a dungeon, It's always on one of his free days ๐Ÿ™‚ I thought you were aware of that

akasuna123
akasuna123Lv5

it's weird that nobody is paying attention to him.

Izana07:Because the fact is that when he goes into a dungeon, It's always on one of his free days ๐Ÿ™‚ I thought you were aware of that
Izana07
Izana07Author

Apart from Grayfia, The others are busy y'know

akasuna123:it's weird that nobody is paying attention to him.
Paulcait
PaulcaitLv4

again i don't know just speculating. I am going to read it now

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Joao_Pedro_5293
Joao_Pedro_5293Lv13

its harรฉm???

Izana07:Apart from Grayfia, The others are busy y'know
Ceracorus
CeracorusLv14

Bro the dungeos and training aren't really developing plot, when all the knowledge we have is that sirzechs is dead and his father took his place. The one time ewhen you were propelling the plot forward you instantly split off into when the Mc went into the A grade dungeon... But I'm still gonna read the story, I've enjoyed it somewhat

Izana07:๐Ÿ˜ฉ Seriously bro, this is developing the plot. If you want to have the plot up to your liking, you can always go read other DxD books or write your own Fanfiction. it is really important to note that if I made him OP from the beginning without noting the readers on how he got his power, I would get negative backlash and if i don't do this training arc... there's still negative backlash
JustTiredOfPicking
JustTiredOfPickingLv11

+ how tf Zeoticus became a maou... he's far weaker and unqualified...

Izana07:๐Ÿ˜ฉ Seriously bro, this is developing the plot. If you want to have the plot up to your liking, you can always go read other DxD books or write your own Fanfiction. it is really important to note that if I made him OP from the beginning without noting the readers on how he got his power, I would get negative backlash and if i don't do this training arc... there's still negative backlash
fiction_writer
fiction_writerLv2

There are many plotholes I don't any idea how did this get 4.someting in the review like common man I was misled

JustTiredOfPicking:+ how tf Zeoticus became a maou... he's far weaker and unqualified...
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