i don't Like where this Story ist heading. this jack of all Trades kinda Thing ist seriously Off Putting. i expected a Story about a Dude with a music system, doing music. but he Just does everything Like there weren't Just 24 hours in a day. programming, Game development, acting, drawing, scriptwriting, im assuming directing as Well and we haven't even reached chapter 100 yet. where is this gonna end? a more focused Story is what i' d prefer. many of similar Stories do this and music Always gets pushed to the Sideline. let me guess is CEO of his own company next.
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I understand your frustration and I respect that, my side as an author is that focusing only on music and nothing else would make the story very repetitive, with Noah just writing songs, posting songs, doing shows, writing songs, posting songs, doing shows... endlessly. It's rare to find stories focused only on music because it's difficult to write a story only about music without it ending in 200 chapters. I have a lot of plans for Noah and to keep the story going well and that it has a constant, satisfying development, and not repetitive, it's necessary to write different things to vary the development. Thanks for the review, I hope that with this explanation you understand whether or not the story is for you :)
i understand. from my point of view no matter what, if you write a story going for 600-1000+ chapters you will never avoid repetitivness. my first xianxia was panlong and because i was new to the genre i finished it, the first and last xianxia i would ever finish because even though i love the concept of cultivation the repetitvness didn't escape my notice starting from the second novel,regardless of expanded activities like alchemy, talisman making or array making etc.. while you might expand his activities to acting, directing, corporate managment and what not, the essence of the story, of aweing the masses and watching the reactions still remains the same no matter what. so the repetitivness will still set in. so a music focused story with 300 chapters and then a spin off, movie focused, or smth. i would actually prefer, although that might just be a matter of taste. the most important part of writing a story is to know when to end it.
NunuXD:I understand your frustration and I respect that, my side as an author is that focusing only on music and nothing else would make the story very repetitive, with Noah just writing songs, posting songs, doing shows, writing songs, posting songs, doing shows... endlessly. It's rare to find stories focused only on music because it's difficult to write a story only about music without it ending in 200 chapters. I have a lot of plans for Noah and to keep the story going well and that it has a constant, satisfying development, and not repetitive, it's necessary to write different things to vary the development. Thanks for the review, I hope that with this explanation you understand whether or not the story is for you :)
