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Ujay
UjayLv135mth
2024-11-09 17:45

The premise is good but MC act more cowardy than original Leon and there are a lot forced plot even Zola punishments not satisfying at all.

Rising up from a Nobleman to Intergalactic Warlord!!

ManOfCultureLeon
3.7
177 Chs

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Dragonia_101
Dragonia_101Lv6

Nothing about the World background or any details about the world is explained clearly Story is illogical and Main character and his family members are spineless fools who despite having the power to overwehlm the kingdom,but does nothing. Mc father forces mcs lover into slavehood cause his wife said so. MC having the power and influence free her without any problem, did nothing but instead says that he will earn money to get her.

8mth

Tarhun_Abier
Tarhun_AbierLv4

the heck did i just read? The MC is the strongest person in the world!!!BUT WAIT!!! He's the underdog .Because god forbid he actually uses his powers. The MC is the only person in the world who can fix old Technology(A very Big Deal) but noone thinks that he's worth anything BECAUSE the author is incapable of writing a stronger with a strong MC . how this story has so many people following it is beyond me. do yourself a favour and ignore it. Trust me you will thank me!

6mth
FourEyesKiller_1
FourEyesKiller_1Lv1

it was so bad

8mth
JudgeFate_18
JudgeFate_18Lv1

Can't move on since chapter 14, my head hurts and the nerves in my brain is about to blow of Drama a bit forced so are the characters... Character leon becomes a push over when he can literally has the power make his step mother and step siblings 'disappear' or have them encounter an unknown 'accident'... And don't know when is his equal rights is equal fights would show but hit damn his a balless shet, the so-called 'nobles' treats him with the disrespect that's understandable, but bro letting them go with only a slap on the wrist yeah sure fine, but at least have them pay about 10x no a 100x for your service and products, sure the female characters are fine... Mediocre at best no essence aside to be there and found for him no character what so ever conclusion there's a saying First impression are important as it creates the basis and structure of what the story you want to entail be delivered to the audience lastly this story has no road, no light at the end of the tunnel it just stretches in the darkness

6mth
BurritoBarbarian
BurritoBarbarianLv14

back with yet another banger can't wait for more chapters.

9mth
HeavenlyIko
HeavenlyIkoLv15

Forced myself to read all the way to chapter 44......and it's a waste of time! Strong MC and he is the world intelligent MC but he can't do anything to a freakin mortals and a spineless mc. Not worth it.

5mth
justjohn
justjohnLv14

sigh... honestly, it's my fault. I couldn't be bothered remembering your name when I dropped your other pieces. If I had known... The drama's too much. The characters are garbage. The jokes... I don't even now if it was supposed to be funny... I only chuckled cause I thought the joke was dry and trash, the mc and love interests being trash for finding it funny.

5mth
DukeMaster
DukeMasterLv4

it's an absolute blast reading this just the amount of things mixed in is staggering you have to read it it is worth it

6mth
Fito
FitoLv5

It's interesting, the story is based on an anime whose name I don't remember.

8mth
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