Can't move on since chapter 14, my head hurts and the nerves in my brain is about to blow of Drama a bit forced so are the characters... Character leon becomes a push over when he can literally has the power make his step mother and step siblings 'disappear' or have them encounter an unknown 'accident'... And don't know when is his equal rights is equal fights would show but hit damn his a balless shet, the so-called 'nobles' treats him with the disrespect that's understandable, but bro letting them go with only a slap on the wrist yeah sure fine, but at least have them pay about 10x no a 100x for your service and products, sure the female characters are fine... Mediocre at best no essence aside to be there and found for him no character what so ever conclusion there's a saying First impression are important as it creates the basis and structure of what the story you want to entail be delivered to the audience lastly this story has no road, no light at the end of the tunnel it just stretches in the darkness
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