Ujay

Where did Subaru get 20 holy coin? I think selling 'metia' with different aproach or dialog is better. Earlier chapter feel rush but latter chapter feel much better and entertaining.

I think your story is good but lack in depth. it's okay to progress it like this but some unbelievable narrative like this can break immersion.

I read just to waste some time but it's actually really enjoyable.

But it's made sense, Haku with this technique even loses against "genin"🫠