Ujay

If it's before his 'death' it will make more sense, this make mc look stupid

I really like the premise, it's rare to see lotr and elden ring stories

The start of premise is good but some detail make people turn away from the stories. First MC lack personality but it's okay because he is ex-machina so it's fit the problem he is inconsistent and sometimes make illogical choices. Second if you want to make female MC just make it female from the start, make him a male and gender bending him make many people turned off. People who read synopsis assume it's male but he's not. Just add "transmigrated to female ex-machina" so it's not misleading people or just add tag

With this Fang Yuan may be start “rebelling” against system but I think He will keep righteous act as it’ll be usefull

It’s really good to make system part of the world building not some kind unlimited power up

I don't think talking like this make a good story just do it or plan how to do it. Day dreaming like this make story feel cheap

Good start and the premise good too but its hard gaining attraction with update speed being very slow

I like the premise. It give advantages bit not too much

Yeah he should binge read and take any information when he can