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Tomataoo
TomataooLv137mth
2024-09-30 18:28

i can describe this fic with two words: child fantasy. and like all others children fantasies it have: - hollow characters - absolutely bland mc - a lot of illogical actions

Overlord: The Multiverse

Black_Bolt_
3.9
225 Chs

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Tomataoo
TomataooLv13

like seriously, mc soloed WOLD BOSS at level 86, which is absolute bullshit

7mth
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PixelPiranha
PixelPiranhaLv3

maybe he just got a good gamer chair bro?

Tomataoo:like seriously, mc soloed WOLD BOSS at level 86, which is absolute bullshit
3mth
7
DaoistsLixYt
DaoistsLixYtLv4

Don’t forget the most important mistake : Pokémon harem

1mth
2
odeiochinavenenosa
odeiochinavenenosaLv1

jogo d ark

Tomataoo:like seriously, mc soloed WOLD BOSS at level 86, which is absolute bullshit
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Gh0st00
Gh0st00Lv15

well there is quite a few mistakes like things being mentioned that we're actually never mentioned but even though the MC says they were mentioned even though they weren't and it's a Pokemon harem not my cup of tea

11mth

Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

22 chapters, or something like this. Start was a mindless cliche, but that's just how webnovel are... But after this was something unexpected! A weirdly realistic and unnecessary "funny" overlord story... Nope, not from the start of the series, where mamonga gets to a new world. But from playing a game... Which doesn't operate like a game at all. Somehow, one guy could take a raid boss, newly one, means he didn't overleveled them. It's called a "WOLRD ENEMY" not just for show. Which online game works like this? I just don't know... I'm not intrested in Sao level of playing a game in the novel. The stakes are null, how is this supposed to be interesting? Oh, right... We got a clown on a main character. Truly, those npc would appreciate you sense of humor. ... You get my point, it's just that's useless and unbelievable.

8mth
Fantastic_Rayan_04
Fantastic_Rayan_04Lv4

Great Start Bro continue what you are doing bro I hope it will become a masterpiece like Multiverse cliché or maybe better I sure think and hope so so please don't drop it or be concerned aur critisim it is good story

1yr
Black_Bolt_
Black_Bolt_Author

My Fan fiction so I must give it a full stat.

1yr
Bertinho_Gamer
Bertinho_GamerLv1

cringe as fuck. the story makes no sense. a lot of contradictions

3mth
Volhter
VolhterLv4

Okay, the beginning was so-so, but it got better with the chapters. I like MC's personality. The interactions with the guild members were fun, which made me a little uncomfortable when they just disappeared. And now the chapters are getting shorter and lacking in content...

10mth
LastGod
LastGodLv5

I got bored of the first arc and thought i would skip to the next one..... but the first arc is waaaaaaaaaaaaay too long and the next doesnt even start immediately. Too much noise in this fanfic not enough fun for me.

4mth
omnioutergod
omnioutergodLv14

don't drop it plz I'm seen alot of authors just drop a good story after 2 or 3 chapters I'm like it so far

1yr
Kaxharu_Ryuzaki
Kaxharu_RyuzakiLv1

fue una buena lectura, pero la personalidad del protagonista no me gusta, hace tantas referencia y chistes que luego empezaron a volverse aburridos. Las interacciones con los otros personajes fue entretenida, pero sus decisiones son demasiado aleatorias, no parece tener un gran plan o no parece tenerlo, talvez sea por la gran cantidad de comedia. No fue tanto de mi agrado. 3☆ Diseño personaje 4☆ Todo lo demás

9mth
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