Tomataoo

Fic is filled with a lot of unnecessary explanations, MC arrives at hog at 33 chapter. you can safely throw away half of the chapters and fic wont lose anything. also, mc is freaking retard. He accured gold and what did he do? throw it left and right and spend THOUSANDS galleons openly in such a knot community as a wizarding world. he is not robbed or killed only because author dont think and plan. also, its totaly not suspicious from a no name ophran.

its ridiculously chinese. and its kinda mtl-ish

i wonder just what you consider good work if this is bad in your opinion

but cudos for crazy ideas, like with tiamat past. that was very creative

first: its written with AI, so expect needlesly long description for word count sake. And the author seems to just slap any idea that came to his mind into the text - regardless of it fitting or not. basically, its a mess of random ideas forced into 1 plot, barely holding together

whats the point is the question all this venus-earth charade with 3.5 billion years seems like grandiose show, but for what? for its "cool shit*? seems pointlessly edgy to me

not bad, but MC is kinda retarded. i mean, he is super worried about greasy food consumed by freaking nyarlathotep. like, dude WTF?

ah, here we go again. my fifth time here, but i cant resist re-reading it from time to time. its just that good

60+ chapters just for academy. yeah, no. And they are not interesting, just boring

typical Chinese fic, nothing more to say. At least, translation quality is good