Tomataoo

i started to read this without much hopes, but boy, i was pleasantly surprised. This fic is basically about war vet living second life and suddenly got chat. Sure, ive read a plenty of those. What is different from regular mediocrity is the characters Chat members are feel like actual people. They are and the MC is alive. MC is progressing and have actual character development . Sure some parts are somewhat farfetched or others chars are too trusting or there are some not-so-believable situations , but i greatly enjoyed reading this

i died from cringe. 2nd chapter: rias is reincarnating emiya. tries 1 knight - too low. ADD 7 PAWNS. i was like wtf dude? lore is at vacation? and isnt issei was reincarnated by 8 pawns? next she said that issei got reincarnated by 1 mutated pawn. Okay, still not good but better. And then she said that coincidentally ALL her pawns are mutated. and then i flipped

i just cant... this story feels so much like Chinese novels that i nearly died from spitting blood, but thankfully my ancestor saved me! But seriously, too much chinese mtl style vibes

idea behind this is interesting but its all ruined by just bad writing. MC and characters are simply badly writed. Thea are inconsistent, do stupid thing for stupid reasons and the biggest of all - mc is a child. stupid, powerful child and it show. If you are ok with reading about person whose mental age is around 10 years old i guess thats your thing

writing quality is actually pretty good. but the plot is just.... NC is arrogant and simply isnt likable. imagine cliche arrogant noble on the better end and thats MC. but what truly irked me that he is arrogant because he is powerful. And he is powerful because of king piece What a joke. Also, author describe Rias as BEST YOUNG PEERAGE MANAGER. which is absolute bullshit

lol. relax dude, i just reviewed this work based of my experience. if you cant read reviews with cool head and without taking it personally - just dont read them. like you said: nobody appiointmentyou to do that

while i appreciate the amounts of lore of hi3 author have a very bad habit of repeating info and adding literally unnecessary details. for example in sakuta samsara he put a little scene of kallenXsakura yuri tome. while i am pkay with yuri that part was completely unnecessary for the story and characters themselves . As for repeating, he literally repeat facts about kallen and sakuras meeteng and story more than 3 times. Like he explained how they meet at least 3 times in different chapters. And its even can be present in ONE PARAGRAPH. Explain 1 thing at 1/3 of paragraph, 2/3 goes to something related to that and 3/3 goest into repeating information from 1st third. It just getting ridiculous

so? You can read you own work to understand its flaws. I reviewed this fix based on the my experience and it wasnt pleasurable may as well warn others that saw this 4+ rating (how it is not at least 3 is a miracle . No bad feelings, just facts. Also, i didnt saw any improvements in 40 chapters that i read

so! many! exclamation! marks!!!! but aside from that, pretty good 4/5

not much to say. grammars are no good, sentences looks like the are MTL'd. dialogs are poorly written, with MTL'ish style. Characters and story beginning are just plain stupidity. 1/5 with almost none redeeming qualities