Tomataoo

Writing quality is shit. Commas? Periods? Nah, just steamroll full paragraph without any punctuation! Really hard to read. Also, characters are kinda 1-dimensional, doing this or that without logic. They are simply talking dolls, lacking any deph. ESPECIALLY mc. he is really flat without any personality

not bad, but MC is kinda retarded. i mean, he is super worried about greasy food consumed by freaking nyarlathotep. like, dude WTF?

ah, here we go again. my fifth time here, but i cant resist re-reading it from time to time. its just that good

60+ chapters just for academy. yeah, no. And they are not interesting, just boring

typical Chinese fic, nothing more to say. At least, translation quality is good

okay, just hear me out. second shapter. MC meets elder, they shared TWO sentences and the rest of the chapter is consists entirely of inner monologue with so much small and useless details that simply doesn't really matter that i dropped this. Author uses ai to write or deliberately use so much time to describe small details so he can get better word count. both are disgusting

grammar is average (3/5) plot is ridiculous characters are plain how its overall is 4+ is a mystery

sorry for the grammar, autocorrect is living its own life 😔

I've seen praises for this fic for a while but postponed trying it for a whale (~year i believe . For the record, ive started reading this at 8pm and i stopped at 6am. Yeah. good thing that next day is sunday 😀 Sooo.... its truly a masterpiece. it started very slow, and it still is. But the quality is incredible. You feel that MC is alive and not mindless drobe, as well as the other characters. When danzo and others schemes were introduced i thought that would be classic cliche villian 2-steps shit, but boy i was wrong. Its really interesting to uncover them with the MC and interludes. And there is filler stories (au and canon). Surprise-surprise they are really good! If you are fan of detective works you should really check this out. sire they are not that deep, but nonetheless interesting. Another good thing that through the work you feel that author improves. at first ~30-40 chapters work is good but not 5 stars. But later it picks up and become even better! Kudos to author and keep up with good work!

Okay i started reading this to pass time, but.. its actually quite good. Sure its no masterpiece but a solid 4/5