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Volhter
VolhterLv49mth
2024-06-12 19:14

Okay, the beginning was so-so, but it got better with the chapters. I like MC's personality. The interactions with the guild members were fun, which made me a little uncomfortable when they just disappeared. And now the chapters are getting shorter and lacking in content...

Overlord: The Multiverse

Black_Bolt_
3.8
213 Chs

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Black_Bolt_
Black_Bolt_Author

I will improve and Thanks for your review

9mth
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Medas_Morningstar
Medas_MorningstarLv4

you like mc personality?!

8mth
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Volhter
VolhterLv4

I love a chaotic vampire!

Medas_Morningstar:you like mc personality?!
8mth
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Fantastic_Rayan_04
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My Fan fiction so I must give it a full stat.

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Kaxharu_Ryuzaki
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fue una buena lectura, pero la personalidad del protagonista no me gusta, hace tantas referencia y chistes que luego empezaron a volverse aburridos. Las interacciones con los otros personajes fue entretenida, pero sus decisiones son demasiado aleatorias, no parece tener un gran plan o no parece tenerlo, talvez sea por la gran cantidad de comedia. No fue tanto de mi agrado. 3☆ Diseño personaje 4☆ Todo lo demás

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