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Game_B_RollLv46mth
2024-09-18 01:01

The story is good and everything the only problem that this novel has is the fight scenes!! Mainly because the attribute difference because in many situations even if the attribute difference ain't even like 50% for a few attributes the MC just gets manhandled which doesn't make sense especially in earlier fights when enemies didn't have special powers!! Like MC can defeat the bullies when they have multiple times more attributes and more combat skills cause of his superpowers which makes perfect sense. But when MC has better skills but latter on the enemy had just s bit more attributes the MC needs a power up even if because of MC's superpowers even if he had 50% more attributes MC should suppress them!! So like a lot of fights are unnecessarily long. Author you do know that it would be good if this was animated but reading it all you just like lose track of what is even happening unless you meditate to perfectly picture the fight in your head which is like the biggest problem here!! ***** Author this novel currently gives the vibes it is in its last phases. So it is that true of will it go on for +200 more chapters.

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THE_V1S1ON
THE_V1S1ONAuthor

Only part 1 there will be I am the Mentor of Spider-Man 2

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THE_V1S1ONAuthor

thank you for your feedback...✧⁠\⁠(⁠>⁠o⁠<⁠)⁠ノ⁠✧The main character had trouble fighting because he was up against hundreds of Spider-Men. Unlike Peter, who got help from Takuya and Hobie, who was in a one-on-one battle with the Spectacular Spider-Man, the main character holding back was overwhelmed fighting so many Spider-Men, especially considering how strong they are. That's why he uses berserk to subdue them overwhelmingly. ヾ⁠(⁠*⁠’⁠O⁠’⁠*⁠)⁠/

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Game_B_RollLv4

Mate I have yet to read half the story so don't know what you are own about. This is my observations for first 100 or so chapters.

THE_V1S1ON:thank you for your feedback...✧⁠\⁠(⁠>⁠o⁠<⁠)⁠ノ⁠✧The main character had trouble fighting because he was up against hundreds of Spider-Men. Unlike Peter, who got help from Takuya and Hobie, who was in a one-on-one battle with the Spectacular Spider-Man, the main character holding back was overwhelmed fighting so many Spider-Men, especially considering how strong they are. That's why he uses berserk to subdue them overwhelmingly. ヾ⁠(⁠*⁠’⁠O⁠’⁠*⁠)⁠/
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