Review Detail of Kabuk5 in Punching through the multiverse.(Currently Visiting Hunter X Hunter.)
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A story that jumps from 0 to 100, in like three chapters, the MC is completely crippled by the drawbacks with no mentions if he's going to be able to override them, and something I always found stupid in the DarkWolfShiro's character creation style is choosing the class before the drawbacks, why would I want to choose a mage class and get a drawback that prevents the usage of mana? There's no time for story development, no character development whatsoever beyond "Life is sacred, but not all life is sacred I guess" and the world background hasn't been explained at all. At least the writing quality itself is good, you should probably plan your story, because so far it looks as if you took a board with ideas, put on a blindfold and started throwing darts to know what should you write next.
Punching through the multiverse.(Currently Visiting Hunter X Hunter.)
InterPlanarGod
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To be honest, I really fucking do. The story will slow down after they arrive in Jujutsu Kaisen and the banes will be erased by jump-chan. That's really all I'm going to tell you without reading it.
Kabuk5:To be fair, that is the impression that I have so far, could change later, but I feel like you're speedrunning the introduction arc and want to be over it.
I'm not about to explain everything before showing it via the story. You clearly didn't read far enough into the story. the first two arcs are the introduction arc, and the hanma arc. Both arcs are part of the prologue. I will let you have this review here for 5 days, but unless you read it until you can make a reasonable opinion based on the facts of the story which has BARELY started, I'm going to delete if if you don't in those 5 days.
InterPlanarGod:I'm not about to explain everything before showing it via the story. You clearly didn't read far enough into the story. the first two arcs are the introduction arc, and the hanma arc. Both arcs are part of the prologue. I will let you have this review here for 5 days, but unless you read it until you can make a reasonable opinion based on the facts of the story which has BARELY started, I'm going to delete if if you don't in those 5 days.
To be fair, that is the impression that I have so far, could change later, but I feel like you're speedrunning the introduction arc and want to be over it.
InterPlanarGod:I'm not about to explain everything before showing it via the story. You clearly didn't read far enough into the story. the first two arcs are the introduction arc, and the hanma arc. Both arcs are part of the prologue. I will let you have this review here for 5 days, but unless you read it until you can make a reasonable opinion based on the facts of the story which has BARELY started, I'm going to delete if if you don't in those 5 days.
InterPlanarGod:As of the last chapter, this chapter, being inacurate as it is, will be removed soon. just saying. Maybe give it another chance.