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  • Kabuk5
    Kabuk51d
    Commented

    yesterday ?

    " System please show my chakra level no different than tomorrow morning to others."
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    Great Shinobi System In Multiverse
    Anime & Comics · gursimran_singh
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  • Kabuk5
    Kabuk53d
    Replied to Kabuk5

    chapters* why isn't there an edit button in the app.

    Ch 88 C88 Mommy
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    I’m Voldemort (MCU Xover)
    Movies · AlienWarlord
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  • Kabuk5
    Kabuk53d
    Commented

    It was good seeing him be more balanced, the last chapter he had been kind of loopy.

    Ch 88 C88 Mommy
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    I’m Voldemort (MCU Xover)
    Movies · AlienWarlord
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  • Kabuk5
    Kabuk54d
    Commented

    nope

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    Ascension Road
    Anime & Comics · JientaiMofu_
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  • Kabuk5
    Kabuk55d
    Replied to DiperZ

    Considering that a huge amount of his qi goes into nurturing his inner world, it is logical, although that depends if it keeps going that way once he is strong enough and the farm becomes more than a farm,

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    The Farming system
    Anime & Comics · Itachi101
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  • Kabuk5
    Kabuk55d
    Commented

    This chapter was rushed wasn't it? The grammar isn't up to your previous standards.

    Ch 14 right hand
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    The Farming system
    Anime & Comics · Itachi101
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  • Kabuk5
    Kabuk55d
    Commented

    Sage's power which turns her mind in a computer allowing her to learn anything but she hast to make a lot of effort to do so as it takes most of her psychic powers, but has the potential to be incredibly strong if trained properly. Basically psychic/esper powers that start on a low level but trainable.

    I'd like you guys to suggest some UNDERRATED powers, like Cypher's language abilities, which can SLOWLY turn MC into an OP character.
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    The Legend of Baldur [DROPPED]
    Movies · HelloDarkness07
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  • Kabuk5
    Kabuk57d
    Commented

    No tenia 12 antes

    "En cualquier caso no podemos romper el compromiso ahora que dos de los cuatro maou están implicados en esto, no solo sería deshonroso sino que además sería como actuar deliberadamente contra las órdenes de los maou" Lord Gremory dejó que su cuerpo descansara en el respaldar del sofá "Además aún son niños, Raiser-kun tiene ocho años y Rías-chan solo tiene cinco. Pido respetar la decisión de los Maou hasta que mi hija por lo menos tenga 17, en ese momento se podrá tomar mejores decisiones..."
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    ¿Reencarne como Raiser Phoenix?
    Cómic FAN · Anon20K
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  • Kabuk5
    Kabuk57d
    Posted

    You should change the quirk, using the Fate frenchies is not enough, there are not enough servants worth a damn from France.... now if you mean the Fate franchise, that's a completely different idea.

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    The Mythical Hero (mha x fate) fanfic
    Anime & Comics · salt_empress
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  • Kabuk5
    Kabuk58d
    Commented

    Typo?

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    DXD: I Stand Above All
    Anime & Comics · Legend27
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  • Kabuk5
    Kabuk58d
    Commented

    +1

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    A Mutant's Ascension
    Anime & Comics · InGlorius
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  • Kabuk5
    Kabuk58d
    Replied to YAMEROOOOO

    Hikari Usagi?

    Maybe we should've stopped when her bed broke down? Or when we ran out of protection...
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    Light Human In MHA
    Anime & Comics · VeganMaster
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  • Kabuk5
    Kabuk58d
    Replied to sudesh_reddy

    Eh, with quirk laws they are probably allowed to marry the moment they pop a boner

    Maybe we should've stopped when her bed broke down? Or when we ran out of protection...
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    Light Human In MHA
    Anime & Comics · VeganMaster
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  • Kabuk5
    Kabuk59d
    Commented

    Eri: Little sibling, get!

    Maybe we should've stopped when her bed broke down? Or when we ran out of protection...
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    Light Human In MHA
    Anime & Comics · VeganMaster
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  • Kabuk5
    Kabuk511d
    Commented

    Aliens incoming, prepare Uranus

    'It almost feels like all this lack of change is by design or maybe i am overthinking it ' Tenichi thought.
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    Mha: Tenichi Iida
    Anime & Comics · 80s_Disco
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  • Kabuk5
    Kabuk512d
    Commented

    He should know the greatness of Marx!

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    Talent System In Naruto
    Anime & Comics · ravenwings
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  • Kabuk5
    Kabuk515d
    Commented

    Sacred gears are missing, unless it was on purpose

    Ch 141 Pre-Highschool DxD
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    From Mortal to Divinity
    Anime & Comics · Servant_Ambrosius
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  • Kabuk5
    Kabuk516d
    Posted

    This story is info dump after info dump, there are like three or four lines of story per chapter and the rest is information about weapons/tech/races/etc. There is literally no character development so far, the grammar's okayish and the update stability is pretty good though, you should probably write your information chapters separately from the story so that you don't interrupt the flow.

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    NEW KIND OF GRIMM
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  • Kabuk5
    Kabuk517d
    Commented

    No electives?

    Ch 27 26) Date!!! and Test!!!.....
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    Life In Extended Twilight
    Movies · KillingSoftly
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  • Kabuk5
    Kabuk528d
    Commented

    Polaris

    I aslo wanted you guys suggestion for the hero name. If Magneto is fine with then Magneto it is. But if you have some other suggestions then please comment here.
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    A Mutant's Ascension
    Anime & Comics · InGlorius
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