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It is, it's the fastest way to a woman's heart.
Looking at the rewards from the system, memories of Chidori surfaced in Mutsuki's mind. In Naruto, there were various Rasengan techniques, and Sasuke had various versions of Chidori. It was indeed a versatile Ninjutsu. - Kabuk52dCommented
An "assassination" (pfff) technique that's so loud and unwieldly that it had to be modified into different techniques to be useful. Sadly, for some people, Chidori's a man's romance.
Looking at the rewards from the system, memories of Chidori surfaced in Mutsuki's mind. In Naruto, there were various Rasengan techniques, and Sasuke had various versions of Chidori. It was indeed a versatile Ninjutsu. - Kabuk53dCommented
The ending of the previous chapter and the beginning of this one are really disconnected.
This book has been deleted. - Kabuk53dCommentedCh 2 CHAPTER 2 – SYSTEM
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Male or female now?
But as has been said and proven over and over again in history, Humans are quick to adapt, within a few months she finally accepted that she had reincarnated and had sufficiently adapted to her baby body. - Kabuk521dCommented
So, a Xianxia murderhobo then?
Well, aren't you a lucky one! You have a strange fate, Jumper. You tend to find yourself the recipient of power-ups of all kinds, whether or not you're trying to. Events align themselves, coincidence and causality bend and random accidents arrange themselves until you end up the absolute most likely person to receive any power-up that's out there to be gotten. - Kabuk522dPosted
Grammatically, this story is a mess, in the middle of the same paragraph there's a change between subjects, when conversations are happening, you have no idea who's speaking (in chapter 4 his mom told him that in the 2000s people would be less religious, or at least it looked like that because there was no separation between the conversation and his thoughts), the character also behaves so far as if wisdom is his dump stat. If you research a world's culture, you MUST research its religion, specially if you want to write about sensitive subjects! Not enough time for character development or world background, so giving it three stars at the moment and will come back in a few months and address this review.
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His mom knows the future! She also met Truck-kun!
"Son, let me put this in simple words. What you have written is not just going to be controversial but will be declared offensive towards Christianity it's going to be highly frowned upon by Catholic leaders. Many other countries banned the book for a long time due to the blasphemous content. I mean the union of Jesus Christ and Mary Magdalene, and the bloodline that existed is enough for you to get hunted by truly religious people and that will be called religious violence. Do you understand what I am trying to convey? I mean are out of your mind son it's America, vast majority being religious while in the 2000s many were already moving away from christian religion and only the Christians were outcrying about the book." - Kabuk522dReplied to GodOfGreedAs
The book is still 20 in the previous chapter
Henry settled on a Chevrolet Chevelle SS 454 in sleek black, a choice influenced by its appealing aesthetics and the advantage of blending in, given its commonality in the area, even shared with his father's car. Priced just below $30,000, Henry found it to be the right fit. - Kabuk522dCommented
Is this the same story? Where did the orphanage come from?
Several friends are his roommates from the orphanage, so they understand him the best. As for many 'friends' he made in the business field, he just made a little contact with them. Many of them just want to draw his influence in the business so Henry just maintains distance with them. - Kabuk522dCommented
Digital copies, in the 70s....
The revised contract maintained the 40% royalties but introduced a subtle twist – it applied exclusively to hardback and paperback copies, with varying royalty percentages. Notably, the deal excluded any digital copies, showcasing Henry's savvy negotiation to protect his interests in the changing landscape of book publishing. - Kabuk522dCommented
Books in the 80's costed between 5.50~7 if I remember correctly, so it should be cheaper in the 70's. 20 would be a fortune
He then strolls to the new book section and begins to search the book. At this time his eyes caught a book called 'Devotion of Suspect X', he felt it was quite good and just priced at $20 so he decided to buy it. - Kabuk522dCommented
If you wanted to be "Peak" human, why not Mister Terrific (Michael Holt) or Batman? Both are geniuses in multiple disciplines.
"Then keeping all this in mind, I would like to gain the intellect and experience of Norman Osborn from Marvel Comics Earth-616. If you think it's too much, you could remove the knowledge of how to make the Goblin Formula from the memories." - Kabuk522dCommented
English please
It was in this drill where Hideki's flaws were shown, ouf of 25 3p 25 peri 25 close - Kabuk522dCommented
He was an international reporter and is more or less proficient in English? Sus
As the new friends Hideki and Benjie were walking and finding the basketball club, while finding the club Hideki told Benjie "Yo, Benjie-san, in order for you to improve your Japanese, why don't we try communicating in Japanese and if you can't find the words, just ask me, I'm more or less proficient in English, so I can help." Benjie took up the offer and said "Arigato Hideki" - Kabuk523dCommented
Discourse =/= Discord
"Ah, since you have a female voice now. I'll give you a feminine name too. How about Eris? I believe she was a Greek goddess of discourse or something. It might be a strange name for a ship, but given your past, I think it'll suit you. And it's not like you HAVE to act befitting your name or anything. It's just a name." - Kabuk525dCommented
Shouldn't it be Identification function? It isn't a jutsu, just a part of his system.
[First completion of the grand lesson, rewarded with Enhancement Scroll for Identification Jutsu]