very disappointing. the MC is a passenger in the story line with no real motivation to do anything. he just sits there waiting for things to happen.

There is a big problem with the age of the main character. Kakashi created the Chidori when he was 12 years old during the 3rd Great Ninja War. Considering that Kakashi at the beginning of the Naruto manga was 26 years old and the main character of this fanfiction is 18 it means that your character created the chidori at the age of four.

Why do authors just repost cn translation instead of rewriting them. Also, the author does not mention it as a repost so it seems very scummy.

raw halini okudum mangayla çok tutarsızlık var kisame itachi çocukken akatsukiye katılıyor hanzo ölüyor pein yerine geçiyor konoha bilmiyor üstelik olay örgüsüne bakılırsa animede danzo yahikoyu ölüme zorluyor romanda bahsedilmiyor

I will keep this short. The quality of the translation is good, I am not sure where the story will go or how it will progress, but he MC’s and the casts’ characters are likable and authentic (respectively) and overall the narrative is a bit slow paced but in a satisfying way. Decent read!👌🏻

its a really good novel and definitely worth a read. I really enjoyed the dynamic between being friends with itachi while teaching sasuke I'm sure it'll be interesting to see how sasuke reacts once he finds out his uchiha friend was itachi. the pacing is a lil slow but its fairly consistent updates so it equals out.

I read the raw version, there are many inconsistencies for the betteer i don't remember exactly but yahiku didn't survive and and the mc joins the akatsuki much later after he had a direct conflict with danzo

It's very interesting. The translation is overall good. Keep it up 👍

please dont drop this, the novel concept is new, and the write quality is pretty good.