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2024-05-10 05:52

I figured I would write a review since I’m caught up which is currently chapter 58. The main character has a good amount of depth explaining his actions or goals he has set. Side characters aren’t as in depth maybe a few but as of now I don’t think it is a bad thing with this kind of story. I’m terrible at explaining but some stories where every character has a lot of depth works well while some focusing on just the mc and a few side characters every so often works just as good, just depends on the kind of story that is being written. For the world it is done well using the classic model of one region we know about but also aware of a more advanced one. I can also see it won’t be stagnant in one place at least at the start as to me the beginning areas act like a tutorial where we learn about the world in a natural way while the mc learns and prepares for bigger things. Story has a lot of potential with how the mc plans to expand his army/power in the world he is in with hints of plans to expand into space or other worlds someday. Also interesting to see how the author plans on improving the main character since it is a robot and how much he stays completely high tech or integrates magic to make magi tech. TLDR : I found the story interesting and an enjoyable read with the new events and pacing just right to draw you in. Also was refreshing for me as it has been a bit since reading any high tech focused story with a mix a magic. I recommend to give it a try and it has enough free chapters to come to your own conclusions.

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Chronicle27
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Thank you, I appreciate your honest review.

paraDAX
paraDAXLv3

lol, where did you see the depth of characters and a good plot?

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