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SunMedic
SunMedicLv142mth
2024-09-08 06:47

Grammar and sentence structure needs serious work. This is the equivalent of reading an eight graders English homework. Still a good story though. It's just that the writing needs more maturity.

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OP_Supreme
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Thanks for the review, I'll try my best to increase the grammar quality. Thanks again.

AncestorDuck
AncestorDuckLv3

Try grammarly. There is a free version, and while its not 100%, its still better than nothing.

OP_Supreme:Thanks for the review, I'll try my best to increase the grammar quality. Thanks again.
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