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Sadly this author is extremely inexperienced. The premise of the story is not that bad. The execution of the plot is down right atrocious. This story is contains a plethora of grammatical errors and holes all through the plot. Ideas end abruptly and are not fleshed out. There's a certain amount of naivete in the writing that leads you to assume that the writer is very young. All in all this novel is terrible and extremely painful and difficult to read.
A world where humans are stronger? It definitely would not take three years to walk unless you have a physical or mental defect. Was the MC still nursing at six years old?
No choice? Coworkers harassing him? A simple call to company human resources and problem solved. Added bonus is that notice the embezzlement and you are clear. The company has his financial details. So those seniors could have just deposited money directly and blamed him. No need to keep asking him to take money. This setup setting is straight bullshit.
200 gold for a overnight stay and a meal?No way.
Ummm... It doesn't work this way. Drunk without an ounce of evidence equals unlawful arrest and a lawsuit.
Lightning crown. Thunder is just noise.