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2024-08-31 22:21

It’s pretty bad. It romanticizes the useless trash mindset of being a narcissist that also treats women poorly. It seems the author has a kink for this, because they’ve made several other novels with the exact same concept. Very neat.

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( Author here for the second review ) Read this thing, if you want to know about the book... 📝Writing Quality- 3/5 — Seriously, I don't know how to write, I am a science major so, you can say my grammar sucks but hey, I found out people like my grammar. No cap! The Grammarly app shows I have 100+ grammar errors per chapter yet, people like my grammar. Imma be honest, I write how I speak ( English ) and no, I am not from an English country. Also, there may be typos here and there so, please point it out so that the next reader may have a better reading experience. 📝 Story Development: 5/5 — Sigh! To be honest, for a lemon🍋🍋 Novel, this is the best story development you see, and no! I am not bragging, if you like to read Lemon without a beta Mc and a good story where Mc isn't scared then, it is a good place for you. Yeah! Mc doesn't need hundreds of chapters to Fugg a woman. He just needs 3-4 chapters ( I mean just a meeting ) You can find; Manipulation, BlackMail, threats, etc. Also, the adventure is good + making connections and the world building is somewhat good. 📝Character design: 5/5 — what can I say, I design my character from one hand 😜. ( female character ) 📝Updating stability: 5/5 — 3 chaps a day guaranteed. However, when I have some work or I am busy then, 2 chaps a day. 📝 World Background: 3/5 — for a Lemon, this is the best world building you will find with cultivation, pills, and diverse race of harem members~ ahem* ahem* I mean, diverse race, culture, traditions, worlds, and other stuff. ————— Unique things about my book: 👍Constellation Choice: as a reader/ constellation, you have complete mastery over the main character and world. You can actively change the story with your participant. 👍Pay to win: donate gifts = Mc getting stronger. ( well with the karma system, it will be somewhat balanced 😂 for a better flow of the story ) 👍 Lemons: Spicy😜😈 👍 mirroring author: talk nicely and get a nice reply, talk badly and get a bad reply. 👍 begger author: author will beg for a power stone daily. ( yeah! You better donate it or you dying single this life, no cap! ) # Downside; 👎 No Ntr, No Yuri: this book doesn't have Netorare, but there is Netori. Also, no Yuri. 👎 No Slow progression: Mc will gain strength fast and the story progresses relatively fast, just in 50 chapters Mc has multiple blood claudins ( Seggs Sl@ves ) 👎 Cringe dialogue and cliche plot: Sad life brothers, this book is affected by cringe cultivation dialogue like, “ Go and meet Yama, ” “ Courting death, ” “ It seems this brat hasn't seen Mt.Tai ”

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