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Miso_HenLv39mth
2024-05-05 11:33

Read up to chapter 90, all I say is either this story would be your favorite or your most hated. It's masterpiece or cringe. However, author, I hope there will 8 some with his mothers and grandmother, also the mother is a little annoying with how controlling she is. Also, her family seems shady, Mc shouldn't visit them or he will get cooked. Also, please Buff MC, from alpha he became beta with powerful enemies popping from here and there. He even got kidnapped by woman, it's a good thing he managed to get some bed action with the sect master but, if men kidnapped him? That would be bad. However, I like the cold and arrogant nature of Young Master, finally happy to read an actual Villain story where Young Master actually likes Young Master but instead of getting beaten down by the protagonist, he beats them back and steals their woman and mother. Smut on later chapter are fire, compared to the early chapter💦. I hope you can give him a villain halo that can spread protagonist Halo😭😭 I wanna see how Mc toys with protagonists and women surrounding him.

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Cultured_Daoist69Author

Lol, the wrong picture made me rewrite my reply but well---

JockerMansLv3

bro puedes desbloquear los capitulos . desde el 39 tengo que busca como desbloquiarlo y es un embole

Cultured_Daoist69:Lol, the wrong picture made me rewrite my reply but well---
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JockerMansLv3

Friend, can you unlock the chapters so you can read it from the web and not download the application?

Cultured_Daoist69:Lol, the wrong picture made me rewrite my reply but well---
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Cultured_Daoist69Author

Yes! You can unlock from web and read however for privilege you need app.

JockerMans:Friend, can you unlock the chapters so you can read it from the web and not download the application?
JockerMansLv3

The thing is that I don't have a cell phone to download anything. and I am left unable to continue reading the story, which is good

Cultured_Daoist69:Yes! You can unlock from web and read however for privilege you need app.
DaoistArboreLv14

This character has never once been “alpha”…

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Primordial_TruthModerator

( Author here for the second review ) Read this thing, if you want to know about the book... 📝Writing Quality- 3/5 — Seriously, I don't know how to write, I am a science major so, you can say my grammar sucks but hey, I found out people like my grammar. No cap! The Grammarly app shows I have 100+ grammar errors per chapter yet, people like my grammar. Imma be honest, I write how I speak ( English ) and no, I am not from an English country. Also, there may be typos here and there so, please point it out so that the next reader may have a better reading experience. 📝 Story Development: 5/5 — Sigh! To be honest, for a lemon🍋🍋 Novel, this is the best story development you see, and no! I am not bragging, if you like to read Lemon without a beta Mc and a good story where Mc isn't scared then, it is a good place for you. Yeah! Mc doesn't need hundreds of chapters to Fugg a woman. He just needs 3-4 chapters ( I mean just a meeting ) You can find; Manipulation, BlackMail, threats, etc. Also, the adventure is good + making connections and the world building is somewhat good. 📝Character design: 5/5 — what can I say, I design my character from one hand 😜. ( female character ) 📝Updating stability: 5/5 — 3 chaps a day guaranteed. However, when I have some work or I am busy then, 2 chaps a day. 📝 World Background: 3/5 — for a Lemon, this is the best world building you will find with cultivation, pills, and diverse race of harem members~ ahem* ahem* I mean, diverse race, culture, traditions, worlds, and other stuff. ————— Unique things about my book: 👍Constellation Choice: as a reader/ constellation, you have complete mastery over the main character and world. You can actively change the story with your participant. 👍Pay to win: donate gifts = Mc getting stronger. ( well with the karma system, it will be somewhat balanced 😂 for a better flow of the story ) 👍 Lemons: Spicy😜😈 👍 mirroring author: talk nicely and get a nice reply, talk badly and get a bad reply. 👍 begger author: author will beg for a power stone daily. ( yeah! You better donate it or you dying single this life, no cap! ) # Downside; 👎 No Ntr, No Yuri: this book doesn't have Netorare, but there is Netori. Also, no Yuri. 👎 No Slow progression: Mc will gain strength fast and the story progresses relatively fast, just in 50 chapters Mc has multiple blood claudins ( Seggs Sl@ves ) 👎 Cringe dialogue and cliche plot: Sad life brothers, this book is affected by cringe cultivation dialogue like, “ Go and meet Yama, ” “ Courting death, ” “ It seems this brat hasn't seen Mt.Tai ”

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