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Mr_hypocrite
Mr_hypocriteLv49mth
2024-04-05 11:17

I wanted to read your novel, but before that, I would like to ask if the main character is a dishwasher or not. You see, I feel disgusted by protagonists who like older and married women.

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Cultured_Daoist69
Cultured_Daoist69Author

Sorry brotha! Mc has relationship with his step mothers 😅😅 Hope you can find the book you are looking for. 👍👍👍

Mr_hypocrite
Mr_hypocriteLv4

Another dishwasher MC, though I don't understand why you give him so many stepmothers. It sounds like his father is a Chad, while he's just a guy who uses secondhand things...Really not for me. Thanks for the honesty..Good luck.

Cultured_Daoist69:Sorry brotha! Mc has relationship with his step mothers 😅😅 Hope you can find the book you are looking for. 👍👍👍
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Cultured_Daoist69
Cultured_Daoist69Author

We have V too 🗿 but, yeah, stepmothers and others mature woman from top house too...

Mr_hypocrite:Another dishwasher MC, though I don't understand why you give him so many stepmothers. It sounds like his father is a Chad, while he's just a guy who uses secondhand things...Really not for me. Thanks for the honesty..Good luck.
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Mr_hypocrite
Mr_hypocriteLv4

In villain novels, the MC's father has to be loyal to only one woman; that's how it should be, that's the standard. I don't even care about taboos(sinsest), and it's not for me. Two married women are too much in a novel; if there are more than two, then it's just the author's depraved fetishes. Even if you have 'V,' it doesn't matter to me because those annoying old hags are gonna ruin it for me, and I just can't tolerate them,sorry bye.

Cultured_Daoist69:We have V too 🗿 but, yeah, stepmothers and others mature woman from top house too...
DaoistArbore
DaoistArboreLv13

“Uses second hand things” yeah, real meaningful words coming from someone who starts mouth breathing when they smell a hint of lotion that *might* be worn by a woman

Mr_hypocrite:Another dishwasher MC, though I don't understand why you give him so many stepmothers. It sounds like his father is a Chad, while he's just a guy who uses secondhand things...Really not for me. Thanks for the honesty..Good luck.
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Lestrange_
Lestrange_Lv3

why are you so triggered are you "a second hand thing"

DaoistArbore:“Uses second hand things” yeah, real meaningful words coming from someone who starts mouth breathing when they smell a hint of lotion that *might* be worn by a woman
MXL
MXLLv3

Why are you taking his opinion personal???

Lestrange_:why are you so triggered are you "a second hand thing"
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