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2024-03-23 03:02

5 star ⭐ for the sypnosis! Although i hope this novel doesn't disappoint me. what is the best time to plant grass seed in the morning and I can get you some

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Cultured_Daoist69Author

I wonder what 🤔

Cultured_Daoist69Author

Probably early sunrise

Cultured_Daoist69Author

So, how was it? Disappointing?

FBI_LOLILv4

Well,In my opinion the interactions between mc and system is kinda funny and it's still early to pass my judgement if it deserve 1star or 5star. So i will wait until chap 50 to see if the plot is interesting or not. (Although,I do not hope much for the plot because it's obviously an ero novel with strong emphasis on seggs)

Cultured_Daoist69:So, how was it? Disappointing?
FBI_LOLILv4

Also,I'm saddened a bit because he gave his first to maid not his stepmom whose her son beat him up. He said in one chap that he will give his first to stepmom so just imagine Bai Lun or Bai Xiao whatever his name is...hears that his step-sibling fu**ed his mom and that he gave his first to her is...exciting 😆.

FBI_LOLILv4

lol, it's just random words i typed because of 140 word limit

Cultured_Daoist69:Probably early sunrise
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( Author here for the second review ) Read this thing, if you want to know about the book... 📝Writing Quality- 3/5 — Seriously, I don't know how to write, I am a science major so, you can say my grammar sucks but hey, I found out people like my grammar. No cap! The Grammarly app shows I have 100+ grammar errors per chapter yet, people like my grammar. Imma be honest, I write how I speak ( English ) and no, I am not from an English country. Also, there may be typos here and there so, please point it out so that the next reader may have a better reading experience. 📝 Story Development: 5/5 — Sigh! To be honest, for a lemon🍋🍋 Novel, this is the best story development you see, and no! I am not bragging, if you like to read Lemon without a beta Mc and a good story where Mc isn't scared then, it is a good place for you. Yeah! Mc doesn't need hundreds of chapters to Fugg a woman. He just needs 3-4 chapters ( I mean just a meeting ) You can find; Manipulation, BlackMail, threats, etc. Also, the adventure is good + making connections and the world building is somewhat good. 📝Character design: 5/5 — what can I say, I design my character from one hand 😜. ( female character ) 📝Updating stability: 5/5 — 3 chaps a day guaranteed. However, when I have some work or I am busy then, 2 chaps a day. 📝 World Background: 3/5 — for a Lemon, this is the best world building you will find with cultivation, pills, and diverse race of harem members~ ahem* ahem* I mean, diverse race, culture, traditions, worlds, and other stuff. ————— Unique things about my book: 👍Constellation Choice: as a reader/ constellation, you have complete mastery over the main character and world. You can actively change the story with your participant. 👍Pay to win: donate gifts = Mc getting stronger. ( well with the karma system, it will be somewhat balanced 😂 for a better flow of the story ) 👍 Lemons: Spicy😜😈 👍 mirroring author: talk nicely and get a nice reply, talk badly and get a bad reply. 👍 begger author: author will beg for a power stone daily. ( yeah! You better donate it or you dying single this life, no cap! ) # Downside; 👎 No Ntr, No Yuri: this book doesn't have Netorare, but there is Netori. Also, no Yuri. 👎 No Slow progression: Mc will gain strength fast and the story progresses relatively fast, just in 50 chapters Mc has multiple blood claudins ( Seggs Sl@ves ) 👎 Cringe dialogue and cliche plot: Sad life brothers, this book is affected by cringe cultivation dialogue like, “ Go and meet Yama, ” “ Courting death, ” “ It seems this brat hasn't seen Mt.Tai ”

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