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Hm. The ideas behind this seems to be decent, but the writing style is a mess. Too much complicated, over top stuff, obsessively overdescribed wording. This is a scipt at best and a bad story at worst. You know, If I could, I would like to help make this story decent, but its very hard to say the stuff I want in such a unpersonal way. I tried to write helpful, constructive criticism before, but it Just doesn't convey my intensions properly. This is currently only 2 chapters. The only thing that can make this better is a rewrite. Nothing here seems to be thought out, just sum' random thoughts smacked on a Keyboard. I don't even know why I have the need to review this in the first place, but whatever.. Cheers I guess. (Nothing personal, rly. Seriously)
The story quite boring and background character story quite basic to overpowered if other god in danmachi quite smart they can easily know all Buddha familia is from another world after all they came from nowhere it will more fun and interesting if buddha in that story insert background story like he is mortal from ancient time who ascending becoming a god long before god descent on mortal world so he not bound to heavenly rule because he is ex mortal that will be more interesting story or that multiverse power entity can just alter reality for example he can just use some king or famous people in danmachi world to become background story for mc to use so god not be suspicious about mc when mc engraved flana.
5 stars since i contributed in this story by giving ideas and also cuz you are writing it...will update this review after a few chapters maybe.
The Plot is good, the character's develop is OK (Blame the writing style), and overall it is good. But there are grammar errors (Not much), and some phrasing mistakes but still good.
A great work done by my brother 🙂, though it has some notable grammar mistakes, it's good to read it, I enjoyed every chapter of it. Hope you will upload more 😉😉
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It was a nice story until you started focusing on the teammates of mc. I mean the use of having an mc is that the story should revolve around him. Anyway I'm gonna drop until the story goes back to mc.
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ignore powerscaling when reading this because it gets thrown out the window, at least canon strength scaling.
really good story in was not held at gun point to write this review i swear it on my life. just read the story and stop worrying. gosh
[One Piece, Naruto, ,Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba , Attack on Titan, Marvel, DC, One punch man, Douluo Dalu, BTTH, Fairy Tail, Harry Potter, Reverend Insanity ETC...] MC is Akira ------------------------------------------------------------ If there is danger in one place, they will leave and return later to destroy it. The Uchiha Clan was planning a coup out of helplessness. But when they found a safe way, a light in their dark life, they took it. Now, in the multiverse, the Uchiha will become the greatest ever. Itachi is a kind young man in the Uchiha, but to enemies, he’s a nightmare. Shisui is like a natural disaster across all worlds, but his heart remains pure. Sasuke was on the verge of becoming a gangster. Mikoto is finally living the life she always dreamed of with her husband. After returning to Konoha, the Uchiha will awaken the undead—for the greater good and to make things right. Previous: Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba Original World: Naruto First World: One Piece Second World: Attack on Titan Third world:..... --------------------------------------------------------------- To clarify before reading: "This novel is partially my own creation and Mostly a modified translation until chapter 121 then I began writing it myself. The raw I took from: 木叶排挤:我带宇智波去大航海 ----------------------------------------------------------------- You can support me and read up advanced chapters at: patreon.com/_Coreal
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