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ExiledLord
ExiledLordLv151yr
2024-03-24 05:24

Just finished reading the available chapters on MTL. The MC is extremely passive, and the author uses Tang Hao like he is God. Shows up everywhere, literally everywhere like the man has fast travel and chases the MC. I'm tired of it, 505 chapters, and the MC still hasn't used his available resources in an intelligent manner to take care of the Tang Hao or even the Xiaogang problem. I recommend the translator move onto a better fic

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myeyesburn
myeyesburnLv5

xp

Discarded
DiscardedLv4

also its wrong of you to review this fic based on the story which isnt existed yet in this book. there is chance you read wrong mtl and also there is a possibility that the author of this fic in webnovel decide to change the story. you are counting egg before they hatch. you are just being delusional rn

DaoistogqOTQ
DaoistogqOTQLv3

Agree on you bro. Discarded might have been offended since Discarded already made a 5 star review lol

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Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3

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DaoistogqOTQ:Agree on you bro. Discarded might have been offended since Discarded already made a 5 star review lol
Vallandres
VallandresLv4

is this harem?

LongLingTianKeith
LongLingTianKeithLv13

I can't stand this book, got to chapter 510, the author is horrible with accuracy, example, mc could outrun tang Hao at level 50 but then struggles at level 76, multiple teams during the tournament were 20 levels higher than the original for no reason besides plot. Mc always talks about never showing mercy etc but continuously let's tang san and grandmaster go. Mc doesn't use his skills well it's always repeated. there's so many miss spells, or the sentences miss matched. names being miss matched as well. author had the same plot happen 6 times in a row, with zero changes. Mc isn't really that great.

LongLingTianKeith
LongLingTianKeithLv13

he read more than half the book. wtf are you talking about lol. 500 out of 700 chapters. zero changes

Discarded:also its wrong of you to review this fic based on the story which isnt existed yet in this book. there is chance you read wrong mtl and also there is a possibility that the author of this fic in webnovel decide to change the story. you are counting egg before they hatch. you are just being delusional rn
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