Just finished reading the available chapters on MTL. The MC is extremely passive, and the author uses Tang Hao like he is God. Shows up everywhere, literally everywhere like the man has fast travel and chases the MC. I'm tired of it, 505 chapters, and the MC still hasn't used his available resources in an intelligent manner to take care of the Tang Hao or even the Xiaogang problem. I recommend the translator move onto a better fic

i pessimist ic that this book is actually good at first knowing that usually doulou fic is bad because most reincarnated mc treat the world and people in douluo like a pokemon game where girls like pokemon, mc in those fic is so much detached unrelatable to both reader and douluo world. but to my surprise, this one mc is quite relatable. he start as humble and powerless, having to use his cunning to beg and grovel to both tang san and yu xiaogang just so that he can survive another day, its so pitiable and relatable. normal your daily life boy thrown into the world of full of all powerful talented spirit master cultivators with no system and talent whatsoever, how can he survive without relying on alliance and protection or grovel for knowledge in front of revered all knowing sage? but when the fate decide to let him dying, the system is awakened. and mc suege of power doesnt make him snobbish or cocky, eventho he is still have petty hate to bith tang san and xiaogang which tbh relatable and understable. well sometime he forgot his humble beginning but that kind of thing is so rare happened. its a good fic so far

Reveal spoiler

Honestly, this fanfic is one of my favourites right now. Started hating Tang San following his hypocrisy and how he dealt with Yuhao and now seeing him getting defeated everytime he faces MC is really refreshing. Anyway enough talk about Tang San, now I should probably talk about the MC who in my opinion has been written well. The system is not overly powerful and the MC still has to work hard. I would probably like it more if the story revolved more around the MC and him finding his own opportunities and maybe romance, but I guess the author will write about it in the near future since this arc is the first one involving Shrek. Good work author and hope you keep up the good work and for godsake don't drop it like some other authors do with their fanfic.

Don't know what happened but why are the chapters locked for this fanfic?

man it was good story and all suddenly it got premium asking free pass to unlock day before yesterday it was free till now

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Not the intellectual property of the poster however expects us to pay for it ..pretty sure there's a copywriting law this violated. Put it under fanfiction to avoid this. The story itself isn't bad per se. The mc lacks a lot of personality.Just another poorly done iteration of a reincarnated cultivation novel.I was so hoping it would get better.

Was a great fic until the chapters were locked. Just as bad as ghostyz trying to profit off of a fanfiction.