Does this novel include Chinese themes like "your Courting death" or like those face slapping type???? if so then I don't want to read it....

Everything is good but why do commentators have Chinese name?

More romance and more about the system.. But definitely more romantic scenes with more details.

My problem with this novel is that it keeps changing the players names(e.g. Reus was Royce for a chapter, De Bruyne has a different name every chapter,Lahm is Ram at some point). Other than that it's a good sports novel

"More chapters, teacher, it's great! There aren't many soccer novels on web novels, so I'd like more novels like this!!!!"[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

el fic está bien, la traducción es basura , parece que lo tradujeron con Google y no corrigieron nada

This is Good. Keep going, You should probably move it to a different section in order to gain more traction and attention, maybe spend more time editing as well.

There are many errors such as mixed up chapters and missing words and cut chapters so the writing quality is low.[img=Why][img=Why][img=Why][img=Why][img=Why][img=Why]

WQ 1/5: It feels toooooo Chinese for my liking.. Updates 4/5 SD 4/5: It is going well , I'm in 300 CD 3/5: He is good but many other side characters feel a little too chinese when they are not WB 5/5: Well written..

i kinda like this book because of the challenges but the character design is slow and not that cool,l recently started reading another book a Chinese football anime/comic the character there has a few template like Ronaldo, Zlatan, modic, bale, Ronaldonho etc the it's still ongoing.