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byovevaldLv11yr
2024-03-24 06:55

I haven't decided on the stability of the updates yet. But I can say that the story is amazing and well thought out. Of course, I'm a little embarrassed by the small presence of the MC and the long approach to the canon, but I can bear with it.

Humanity Unchained

Vincent_0580
4.6
39 Chs

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Zetsway
ZetswayLv13

A very dry travel log. It's not really a story, as there are no characters or action/drama. The whole thing is the MC went there and then he left but then he went there. There is no dialogue and no characterization of people or places. If you read a story set in 300 or so BC, I think almost everyone will be interested to see how people were living in that era. How villages discover different ways to use their limited technology and magic to make life easier for themselves. And their reaction to the MC. A man that should look alien in any community due to his modern upbringing. Just the fact that the Mc can take a bath, with soap, every day and stay clean should seem weird to the natives... Sadly, this is not the story for that. The Mc run around in some forest and gathers flowers and critters and then switches forest. Oh, and he shows that he can list all the spells in Harry Potter....

1yr

Cedric_7512
Cedric_7512Lv14

Potential Emperor of Mankind-type character making his way across the Omniverse ….? This is an amaazing idea. I wish I had that idea. The story is good. There is not just 3rd Person POV but also a character who is alive. I love it.

1yr
Vincent_0580
Vincent_0580Author

I am not a professional writer, so the character design and writing quality are not top-notch. But, I have to give myself some credit since I always use Grammarly (the free version) to check for mistakes. I am going for a character that takes pride in his humanity. He is immortal now, so he will have to deal with that. In the beginning, he is trying to learn and grow more powerful, so that takes time. (Warning spoiler for ch. 8) To give an example here. If the MC sees things that are custom or just part of a tribe's culture he won't care. But if for example, he sees humans sacrificing humans because they want to appease a beast like a dragon, he will intervene and get rather angry.

1yr
_leonid_
_leonid_Lv5

Travel log, meh.. . ... .. . . ... . .

1yr
_DEKIM_
_DEKIM_Lv1

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1yr
ONE_ABOVE_ALL
ONE_ABOVE_ALLLv6

yo author you dead? if you are my condolences

1yr
ONE_ABOVE_ALL
ONE_ABOVE_ALLLv6

haha guess we got new HP fanfiction thats got potential........my taste for HP fiction is ruin after reading some good fanfic.

1yr
Jackleell
JackleellLv1

why did you stop updating this novel it was so good _____________________________________________________________________________________

1yr
Jackleell
JackleellLv1

good >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

1yr
LazyBlanketCat
LazyBlanketCatLv1

Only on chapter 7 atm so this is subject to change. However, the story so far is great and I am eagerly looking forward to more. [img=update]

1yr
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