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Obviously, the Chinese do not like Momonosuke, but Japan itself. They think their country is better and they're angels themselves, haha.

I didn't like the main character and system. Everything else was normal. Dialogs structure, other characters thoughtfulness and etc. System is really stupid.

Attle is my opinion, you don't have to take it into account to decide whether to read or not. I just leave comments and reviews to blow off steam. And yeah, I've been reading fanfiction for almost 10 years. And I'm so ashamed of it because I can't quit. Life around is too boring.

Overall, I liked the idea and the beginning. From there, I couldn't even bring myself to read. I didn't like the way the Nation of Fire was whitewashed. I don't want to repeat myself, but the Nation of Fire is a textbook collection of a military nation of real unconscionable bastards whose place in hell Satan himself reserved.

In that case, I apologize, redirect everything to the original author.

that's the problem. When you give an AI command to generate a story with a particular genre, it does it in its own style. I've noticed that almost any AI story with a detective genre is imbued with this paranoid shit. But it could be and an authors mark.

And why are you pasting these sentences written by AI in the end, it is really unnecessary. And it ruins the story.

That's interesting, really. But... by the way it goes, this ff could not be finished even in 5 years. Extremely slow, with some unnecessary chapters - fillers. Hope it will end some day.

I don't see any point. Any self-serving help is not help, but debt. If he keeps giving everything to his sect, he's just a dog. Like those sectarian brainwashed cockroaches. Dumb and desperate. If I saw him understand the situation, I wouldn't be outraged.

Another errand dog.