webnovel
Master_0ogway
Master_0ogwayLv131yr
2024-03-20 15:48

The grammer is good. MC is a hipocrit and a psychopath. He is angry about having been treated wrong but does the exact same thing (even worse in my opinion). If you want to write a story were your character finds inner peace by accepting that he shall kill anything out of spite than by all means do so just use the appropriate tags like #VillainMC #DelusionalMC #PsychopathicMC #EvilMC

Liked by 50 people

LIKE
Replies12
TatterStumble
TatterStumbleLv13

That is literally not the character at all yet you left a 2 star review. The only people he killed were the guards guarding his prison who belittled him for 20yrs while locked up and wubao who challenged him to duel to the death. You just lied as an excuse leave a bad review weirdo. So far he's killed significantly less than the furious four when they held off an army. Why lie?

Master_0ogway
Master_0ogwayLv13

Yeah, that kinda was my point. Him killing the guards I mean. Sure they didn't treat him right but common, do you kill anybody for insulting you? It maybe wasn't stated in the movies but for all they know he is the most dangerous prisoner/villain they ever had. So not treating him properly can be attributed to that. While him killing them given the chance proves what they fought him to be.

TatterStumble:That is literally not the character at all yet you left a 2 star review. The only people he killed were the guards guarding his prison who belittled him for 20yrs while locked up and wubao who challenged him to duel to the death. You just lied as an excuse leave a bad review weirdo. So far he's killed significantly less than the furious four when they held off an army. Why lie?
Master_0ogway
Master_0ogwayLv13

On further note I already dropped. Hardly remember the plot so maybe there is an explanation later on. At the time I justed wanted to vent my frustation about the (in my opinion) Evil MC who was supposed to be Anti-Villain.

TatterStumble:That is literally not the character at all yet you left a 2 star review. The only people he killed were the guards guarding his prison who belittled him for 20yrs while locked up and wubao who challenged him to duel to the death. You just lied as an excuse leave a bad review weirdo. So far he's killed significantly less than the furious four when they held off an army. Why lie?
THE_COLON_WEASEL
THE_COLON_WEASELLv13

I dont know, he keeps going around and brutalizing people for doing their jobs. He is acting pretty evil, then he turns around and says im not evil. The character is definitely not a good guy, just tai lung but psychopathic

TatterStumble:That is literally not the character at all yet you left a 2 star review. The only people he killed were the guards guarding his prison who belittled him for 20yrs while locked up and wubao who challenged him to duel to the death. You just lied as an excuse leave a bad review weirdo. So far he's killed significantly less than the furious four when they held off an army. Why lie?
Jokers_Theif_2023
Jokers_Theif_2023Lv12

I am sad now was going to read then you had to say he was not evil

TatterStumble:That is literally not the character at all yet you left a 2 star review. The only people he killed were the guards guarding his prison who belittled him for 20yrs while locked up and wubao who challenged him to duel to the death. You just lied as an excuse leave a bad review weirdo. So far he's killed significantly less than the furious four when they held off an army. Why lie?
DaoistxsblgQ
DaoistxsblgQLv1

Эм а ты смешной Тай Лунг буквально персонаж чей потенциал настолько огромен что тот По устаует ему и единственная проблема было в том что он бы затмил По, ТайЛунга обучали как война, он буквально всегда одерживал победу над всеми врагами, Угвей и Гифу должны были обучить его тому что проигрыш это не конец а возможность встать и стать еще сильней, где Гг психопат и злодей? он мог буквально убить всех жителей Нефритового дворца но нет он принял их как учеников и друзей занимается обучением других и саморазвитием своим, или по твоему то что он не хочет стать ступенькой для возвышения По это плохо? Гг хочет вырваться из под контроля судьбы он хочет сам решать кем он будет, читай внимательно по мне самая важная фраза Тайлунга, я ТайЛунг ощущение что он посылает мир и вселенную говоря что его судьба только в его руках и он не будет марионеткой вселенной

Master_0ogway
Master_0ogwayLv13

The first half of your answer doesn't really have anything to do with my criticism, neither his strength nor his potential were ever in question. To the next point. We don't know if he has killed in the past. all we know is that he attacked the village. But assuming he didn't actually kill anyone, that's no reason to honor him for it, simply because killing is only an option in extreme cases and not: hey, they annoy me but I'm nice and don't kill them for it. that he takes on a role as a teacher to others is also never said. I agree with your last point, nobody wants to be a puppet. It's just the way he secures this freedom, for lack of a better word, that rubs me the wrong way. Translated from german via Deepl

DaoistxsblgQ:Эм а ты смешной Тай Лунг буквально персонаж чей потенциал настолько огромен что тот По устаует ему и единственная проблема было в том что он бы затмил По, ТайЛунга обучали как война, он буквально всегда одерживал победу над всеми врагами, Угвей и Гифу должны были обучить его тому что проигрыш это не конец а возможность встать и стать еще сильней, где Гг психопат и злодей? он мог буквально убить всех жителей Нефритового дворца но нет он принял их как учеников и друзей занимается обучением других и саморазвитием своим, или по твоему то что он не хочет стать ступенькой для возвышения По это плохо? Гг хочет вырваться из под контроля судьбы он хочет сам решать кем он будет, читай внимательно по мне самая важная фраза Тайлунга, я ТайЛунг ощущение что он посылает мир и вселенную говоря что его судьба только в его руках и он не будет марионеткой вселенной
Spatial_Phenomenon
Spatial_PhenomenonLv13

If what you said is true, he is probably acting in bad faith.

TatterStumble:That is literally not the character at all yet you left a 2 star review. The only people he killed were the guards guarding his prison who belittled him for 20yrs while locked up and wubao who challenged him to duel to the death. You just lied as an excuse leave a bad review weirdo. So far he's killed significantly less than the furious four when they held off an army. Why lie?
NOIR_THE_PROMODIAL
NOIR_THE_PROMODIALLv4

after the shifu's fight arc it's start's to become good and the latest chapter was blood pumping, he's gonna hiatus for a month though.

ACHILLES
ACHILLESLv4

na the shifu interactio was cool just the tigress build up just for an i switch my mind no tigress

NOIR_THE_PROMODIAL:after the shifu's fight arc it's start's to become good and the latest chapter was blood pumping, he's gonna hiatus for a month though.
Ireallylikereading
IreallylikereadingLv4

i feel you bro, the guy disappointed me after i decided to read

Jokers_Theif_2023:I am sad now was going to read then you had to say he was not evil
image
Daoist5WQGVp
Daoist5WQGVpLv1

wait who did he switch to cuz i have been waiting for the female lead but got nothing

ACHILLES:na the shifu interactio was cool just the tigress build up just for an i switch my mind no tigress
Other Reviews
Related Stories

Quiz Game system: starting from Marvel Universe

As a dedicated fanfiction translator, I aim to deliver accurate and engaging translations while staying true to the original style. If you’d like to support my work and help me continue translating regularly, please consider subscribing to my Patreon. Your support directly contributes to better quality and faster releases. support me on patron and get early excess to new chapters: patreon.com/user?u=79514336 --- [Please answer the question. Who is Ironman?.] A: Tony Stark B: James Roddy C: Ivan Vanko D: Pepper Pott Tony Stark: "It's me, I am Ironman." Bruce Wayne: "How can a Playboy like you be a superhero?"] A mysterious livestream begins broadcasting across countless realities, pulling heroes and villains into a deadly quiz game. Every question holds the power to change destiny. The first one seems simple—“Who is Ironman?”—but things quickly spiral into chaos when unexpected guests from other universes join the game. As answers are given and secrets exposed, tensions rise. The multiverse teeters on the edge of collapse with each incorrect choice. Tony Stark finds himself facing not only questions, but rivals like Bruce Wayne who challenge his very identity as a hero. multiverse becomes a reality, blending action, wit, and world-breaking stakes. This is more than just a quiz. It’s a battle for truth, legacy, and survival across dimensions. Live stream+multiverse madness+good plot (hello guys I am just translating this novel. all the credit goes to the real author) author name:The left ear has a cat to read the chapters in advance go to my Patreon: patreon.com/user?u=79514336

translator_sama72 · Movies
4.3
674 Chs