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2024-03-23 06:20

love your story’s love how this has begun and how it’s moving

Steel and Sorrow: Rise of the Mercenary king

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4.4
302 Chs

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Allevatore_dicapre
Allevatore_dicapreAuthor

Hey guys, shameless author is here! This is my last work , which I hope it will go well. The starting chapters will be about defining the worl-building of the novel, also the work will follow many stories even though the main one will be of the mc. I hope that you will like it , as I believe it will be my best one

9mth

huH2
huH2Lv4

overall is good but gonna stock more chapter to read this again anyway keep it up and goodluck

9mth
BottomlessShadow
BottomlessShadowLv14

You are building the world background quite nicely. And I love how you are clear about the personality of the characters. And how you progress the story with a clear goal in mind

9mth
Mattigician
MattigicianLv4

Well done to you![img=recommend][img=recommend]

9mth
Graziona_Pomidoras
Graziona_PomidorasLv11

The story has potential, but the beginning "world building" chapters are almost unintelligible. The story keeps jumping to different characters and it ends up completely ruined due to that.

2mth
Suk_min_Tak
Suk_min_TakLv3

novel is good, author is good, but not my type.

2d
xnet4
xnet4Lv1

It's like Game of Thrones and it's terrible... Terribly delicious! The book is great and the author of soldering stars thanks for it!-----------------------------------------------------------------

1mth
Heavy_Fizzing
Heavy_FizzingLv13

fantastic story with realistic world building and history, the most captivating part of the story is the well thought-out plot as through the multiple POV's we get a layered story of different factions and intrigue. Hope this story gets its recognition and support it deserves, good luck Author.

2mth
WetDog
WetDogLv13

Although I’ve only read 6 chapters the world building and lore is nice, I’m liking the characters so far, with only 80 chaoters it’s still like a baby book hoping to see more though. Keep up the book author I like it so far.

4mth
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